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Life Experience In my eye, my father is so adorable, because he can give me advices and help me to make the best decision. My father experienced a lot. When he graduated from college, his first job was to work in the office, then he found life was boring to sit in the office all the day, so he decided to quit and then started his trip to many places. My father had been traveled to many places, he opened his vision and then went back home to find another job he liked. When he met my mother, he thought it was time to settle down. I was so interested in his life experience, I couldn’t help thinking what if I go with him. I must will meet many new persons and then see the beautiful scenery. I want to live as my father, when the time comes, I will travel too.

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Life Experience

In my eyes, my father is so adorable, because he can give me advice and help me to make the best decisions. My father has experienced a lot in life. When he graduated from college, his first job was to work in an office, but he found it was too boring to sit in the office all day, so he decided to quit and started traveling  to many places. My father has traveled to many places; traveling opened his eyes (better to say: broadened his horizons); afterward  he went back home to find another job he liked. When he met my mother, he thought it was time to settle down. I am so fascinated by his experiences, I couldn’t help but think, "what if I had gone with him?" I would have met lots of new people and seen beautiful scenery. I want to live my life like my father. When the time comes, I will travel too.

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