The mist is covering the city
It’s a happy day because I had over all the final exam and ready to start my vacation.
But the weather is so weird today. The heavy fog cover in the city that looks like the scene in the movie “THE MIST”.
Maybe the monster will come out from the mist. Haha I know it is not possible.
I hope the mist will fade in the afternoon because I want to jogging in the mountain.
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The mist is covering the city
Oh happy day! I completed my final exam and I'm ready to start my vacation.But the weather is so weird today. The heavy fog covering in the cit looks like the scene in the movie “THE MIST”.
Maybe the monster will come out from the mist. Haha I know it is not possible.
I hope the mist will fade in the afternoon because I want to go jogging in the mountain.
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The mist is covering the city
It’s a happy day because I had over all the have finished my final exam and I'm ready to start my vacation.But (shouldn't use "but" at the beginning of a sentence in formal writing) Unfortunately the weather is so weird today. The heavy fog cover in the city that looks like the that scene in the movie “THE MIST”.
Maybe the monster will come out from of the mist. Haha - I know it is not possible.
I hope the mist will fade disappear in the afternoon because I want to jogging in the mountain.
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