Giao thông công cộng
[1] Mặc dù hệ thống giao thông công cộng của thành phố Vancouver có những điều có thể tốt hơn (vẫn còn nhiều điểm yếu để khắc phục: there are still weaknesses to be improved), nó thuận tiện, đáng tin cậy (reliable), và giỏi (tốt) [We use "giỏi" for people, not things] hơn hầu hết các giao thông công cộng của thành phố khác.[2] Một lý do (Đó là vì : This is because) thế là xe lửa (tàu) điện ở trên chạy trên mặt đất (runs on the ground) thay thế (vì) (thay vì: instead of) ở dưới lòng đất (underground).
(I'm guessing you're talking about monorails, xe điện or tàu điện is what I call them. Then you'll have tàu điện ngầm for subways; xe lửa is a train that can travel across long distances. xe lửa điện, sadly doesn't exist at all :P).
[3] Điều này để Hành khách (hành khách: passengers) có thể (can) nhìn thấy thành phố qua những cửa số và cũng làm xe lửa cũng mát mẻ hơn vào mùa hè.
[4] Tuy nhiên, hệ thống xe lửa điện của Vancouver (và những thành phố xung quanh) thì hơi cũ. Vì thế, và cũng bởi vì kỹ sự bảo trì (maintenance) không tốt, xe lửa rất ồn áo ào khi đang di chuyển (di chuyển: moving).[5] Khi trong Trên xe (on the train), có lúc thì nhiều lúc quá ồn để nói chuyện được với người bạn bên cạnh tôi (sometimes it is too noisy for me to talk to my friends who are just beside me). Tôi sẽ không bao giờ sẽ mua một cặn nhà ở gần trạm xe lửa (should be xe điện or tàu điện to follow the theme).
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Giao thông công cộng
Mặc dù hệ thống giao thông công cộng của thành phố Vancouver vẫn còn nhiều điểm yếu để khắc phục, nó thuận tiện, đáng tin cậy, và tốt hơn hầu hết các thành phố khác. Đó là vì tàu điện chạy trên mặt đất thay vì ở dưới lòng đất. Hành khách có thể nhìn thấy thành phố qua cửa số và xe cũng mát mẻ hơn vào mùa hè. Tuy nhiên, hệ thống xe điện của Vancouver (và những thành phố xung quanh) thì hơi cũ. Vì thế, và cũng bởi vì bảo trì không tốt, xe lửa rất ồn ào khi đang di chuyển. Trên xe, nhiều lúc quá ồn để nói chuyện được với người bạn bên cạnh tôi. Cho nên, tôi sẽ không bao giờ sẽ mua một cặn nhà ở gần trạm xe lửa.
0 votedOctober 4, 20160- Review: The Secret Life of Pets (2016) While pets are not an uncommon theme to Hollywood, Chris Renaud's the Secret Life of Pets lends a refreshing touch to animated movies. Fast-paced, light-hearted and painted in a vibrant autumn palette, it indeed provides moviegoers a welcome cure for blockbuster blues. Viewers may find themselves quickly pulled into a storyline about a terrier named Max in New York. After his owner brings home Duke, a large, shabby dog, a scuffle breaks out between the two, which ends up with both of them confronting Snowball in the sewers. It turns out that Snowball leads "the Flushed Pets", a gang of abandoned pets that harbour a deep hatred for humans and domesticated animals. Finding out that Max and Duke are adopted, Snowball is incensed and vows to have them killed. Here, the narrative branches into two subplots. One follows the chase of Snowball about the New York metropolitan area; the other focuses on Gidget, a white Pomeranian infatuated with Max. On discovering Max is missing, Gidget leads a rescue squad to seek him. The story then reconvenes and culminates in a final showdown between both factions at the Brooklyn Bridge. Featuring from Instagram-filtered, sun-washed hazy dawns to skyscrapers with dazzling neon signboards at dusk, the Secret Life of Pets is a sumptuous treat to the eyes that none would regret overindulging in. New York's cityscape is exquisitely captured through the bold, vigorous and generous application of autumn colours. The city is a dithering blaze of red-brick neighborhoods, mottled by chocolate and maroon foliage that bestrews its quaint alleys. Besides the visual feast, the conversations in the movie are full of quips and witticism, albeit at times hysterical. Snowball may be seen as a megalomaniac version of Bugs Bunny, whereas Gidget a damsel-in-distress of Mexican soap operas. Though the voice acting is superb, character development is somewhat lacking. Gidget's venture out of her comfort zone is praiseworthy, but the main characters fall flat and feel underdeveloped. In the end, Max remains an egoistic, self-righteous dog, while Duke's remorse on his visit to his previous owner may easily drift off to oblivion. The Secret Life of Pets is quite short, lasting exactly 90 minutes. Yet, its cheerfulness and hilariously crafted conversations together with a mesmerising setting of New York will definitely appeal to moviegoers of all ages and leave them wanting more. It is premiered on 25 August 2016 in Singapore.August 27, 201600
Having children later in life
Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
My essay:
People in today's society tend to delay having their babies when they are young and wait until they get older. This trend is (I suggest using may be/can be here for hedging) attributable attributed to many factors in life and it certaintly certainly will affect not only family life but also society in general.
To begin with, there are several reasons why a number of individuals choose to have children later in their life. Firstly, this decision might give the youth more time to enjoy their life when they are young. For instance, they can spend time travelling around the world without worrying about the children whom they do not have have not yet had. Secondly, people who want to devote all their time to chasing their dreams, for example, being an entrepreneur at an early age, might may have little time to spend with their families when since they are busy doing their jobs. Thirdly, people who at the early stages of their careers usually have low income. Therefore, they may decide to raise a child after ensuring that they can have make enough money to make give them (unclear reference) their children a better life.
However, this tendency might bring about some negative effects on both family life and society. The first impact is the generation gap will be widened. Children might find it hard to adapt to their parent's parents' ways of life, for example, communications between parents and their children can be difficult (need further explanation why this is an example of how hard it is for children to adapt to their parents' lifestyles). Additionally, giving birth too late might cause some healthy risks for the mother as well as the baby according to some scientific researches suggestions of scientists. (how would this affect societies?)
Overall, having children later in life mostly depends on their our opinions but in some ways, it is important to consider some problems upcoming to them later. (this clause is vague, i suggest replacing it with a recommendation to cement your opinion, for example: ...; however, we should avoid having children at the later stages in life because of the repercussions of doing so.)0 votedAugust 14, 20162- #sg51 August 9th marks Singapore's 51st birthday, and we've just had a sumptuous dinner to celebrate it! Tonight dinner features curry duck served with rice vermicelli and assorted herbs specially prepared by my housemate. At first glance, the curry bowl looks like a microcosm of autumn: vibrant hues of yellow in the background interspersed by the greens of chopped coriander and Thai basil. The broth gives off a refreshing concoction of lemongrass, coconut milk, spices from the curry powder, and fresh herbs. It tastes, however, quite sweet--apart from sweet potatoes, I believe she added generous heaps of sugar to the broth, I'd rather it were on a saltier side. Other than that, the duck is nicely done; the drumsticks neither fall off the bones (which signals they have been left simmering for too long), nor are they stuck in between the teeth (a sign of undercooked poultry). To top it off, there are chicken hearts fried in chilli salt (the maroon-brownish parts on the right side of the bowl) which everyone enjoyed immensely. Mind you, the bowl is packed with calories (mainly from the excessive coconut milk), and it fills up the stomach quite fast. I was half-full when there was more than three quarters of what the bowl was able to hold. I also had extra herbs added to my bowl; not only did they garnish the dish, but they also combatted the richness of the broth. In the end, I devoured one and half a bowl of this goodness, and we are still left with an extra pot. I couldn't help it; gluttony is my biggest sin. >:)
August 9, 201600 - Practice #2 Every morning I can’t help noticing the similarities between the cup of coffee I am drinking and G: dark, strong, and earthy. He always fails to appear dandy and foppish; most of the time he is ill-covered, poorly upholstered, yet his sturdy build and handsome complexion make clothes unnecessary for him. Back then, he was about to file for bankruptcy because of his extravagant spending habit. Luckily, one of his courtesans, in a moment of aberration, bailed him out of his debt, and the rest is history. August 6, 201630
- My IELTS result... ...surprised me by quite a fair bit when I received it yesterday. For a virgin to IETLS, the scores are way beyond my expectations; I got 9.0/8.5/8.5/8.0 for Listening/Reading/Writing and Speaking, respectively. Overall I am awarded band 8.5, not too shabby for the first attempt, right? Having said that, I should not gloat over it. After all, this is just one small step towards a bigger goal. My self-imposed end result is to obtain the CPE with a B or above. I reckon that is not an easy ride, but let's see how I fare in this journey. -LPJuly 30, 201610
is this sentence right?
This can put a strain on low-income families, a problem that can be avoided if children are not bombarded with advertisements.
I am wondering , is it correct to use ", a problem that ... " here. If so, what is the name of the grammar rule?---
I am guessing "a problem" here is referring to the word "this" at the beginning at the sentence. I would remove "a problem that" and put "and" to join to two phrases together.
So the sentence will be like this:
This can put a strain on low-income families, a problem that and can be avoided if children are not bombarded with advertisements.
0 votedJuly 22, 20160
