Having children later in life
Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
My essay:
People in today's society tend to delay having their babies when they are young and wait until they get older. This trend is attributable to many factors in life and it certaintly will affect not only family life but also society in general.
To begin with, there are several reasons why a number of individuals choose to have children later in their life. Firstly, this decision might give the youth more time to enjoy their life when they are young. For instance, they can spend time travelling around the world without worrying about their children when they do not have. Secondly, people who want to devote all time chasing their dream, for example, being an entrepreneur at early age might have little time to spend with their family when they are busy doing their job. Thirdly, people who at the early stage of their career usually have low income. Therefore, they decide to raise a child after ensuring they can have enough money to make them a better life.
However, this tendency might bring about some negative effects on both family life and society. The first impact is the generation gap will be widen. Children might find it hard to adapt their parent's ways of life, for example, communications between parents and their children can be difficult. Additionally, giving birth too late might cause some healthy risks for the mother as well as the baby according to some suggestions of scientists.
Overall, having children later mostly depends on their opinions but in some ways, it is important to consider some problems upcoming to them later
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Having children later in life
Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?My essay:
People in today's society tend to delay having their babies when they are young and wait until they get older. This trend is (I suggest using may be/can be here for hedging) attributable attributed to many factors in life and it certaintly certainly will affect not only family life but also society in general.
To begin with, there are several reasons why a number of individuals choose to have children later in their life. Firstly, this decision might give the youth more time to enjoy their life when they are young. For instance, they can spend time travelling around the world without worrying about the children whom they do not have have not yet had. Secondly, people who want to devote all their time to chasing their dreams, for example, being an entrepreneur at an early age, might may have little time to spend with their families when since they are busy doing their jobs. Thirdly, people who at the early stages of their careers usually have low income. Therefore, they may decide to raise a child after ensuring that they can have make enough money to make give them (unclear reference) their children a better life.
However, this tendency might bring about some negative effects on both family life and society. The first impact is the generation gap will be widened. Children might find it hard to adapt to their parent's parents' ways of life, for example, communications between parents and their children can be difficult (need further explanation why this is an example of how hard it is for children to adapt to their parents' lifestyles). Additionally, giving birth too late might cause some healthy risks for the mother as well as the baby according to some scientific researches suggestions of scientists. (how would this affect societies?)
Overall, having children later in life mostly depends on their our opinions but in some ways, it is important to consider some problems upcoming to them later. (this clause is vague, i suggest replacing it with a recommendation to cement your opinion, for example: ...; however, we should avoid having children at the later stages in life because of the repercussions of doing so.)
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