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Pretend

1 Sometimes the boy pretended to be asleep.
2 I pretended to study hard, but actually i I chatted on my phone.
3 Oh! Please you do not pretend to love me. This is an imperative sentence, so you don't need to include the recipient.

Energy

1 We try to boost our energy by eating.
2 As his energy drained, his despair and worrey worry grew.
3 He always gets energy form eating vegetables. Conjugations: I get/he gets.

Summer

1 The summer is very hot in this here.
2 My family always takes a summer vacation at the beach.
3 You have to drink more water in the summer.

Ladder

1 Do you have a ladder? I need to take something from a heigh high place. "High place" is a concrete noun so you need to include "a" or "the". 
2 You should be careful when you stand on a ladder.
3 The man is standing on a ladder.

Today I woke up at 6:00 AM. I drank one cup of coffee and eat ate mixed eggs for breakfast. At 6:30AM I started to play tennis. After that I went home, tooke took a shower and went to my office.

Now, let's have a look at the last sentence.

After a lot of work, at home at — you need to include a preposition to specify time (like "at 8PM" or "at around 7:30"). 

about 8PM, I — you need to include a subject in order to form a clause. If the sentence doesn't have a subject and a verb, it is an incomplete sentence. 

 had a ligth light dinner to eat and went bed because I was too tired.

Finally, we have the sentence:

After a lot of work, at home at about 8PM, I had a ligth light dinner to eat and went bed because I was too tired.

-It's important to praise children's talents. (Good!)

-This food looks bad, but tastes really good. (Good!)

-This movie expresses very well the human's complex mentality. The movie expresses the human's complexity very well. (Your mistake is syntax.)

-That kid wants so much that toy so he cried loudly on purpose. That kid wants that toy so much he cried loudly on purpose. (Your mistake is syntax. Also, you sentence is implying that the kid didn't get the toy, because you are using Present Simple in the first clause "that kid wants that toy so much" and Past Simple in the second clause "he cried loudly on purpose".)

-We are already on the 10 month, it has clearly become cooler. We are already in the tenth month, it has clearly become cooler. (Your mistake is a time preposition. We use "in" with years and months. We use "on" with specific dates like "on the 4th of July".)

-Even if my grandmother doesn't know any english word, she traveled alone to America. Even though my grandmother didn't know any English words, she traveled alone to America. (Your mistakes are: even though vs even if, use of tenses, capitalisation of country names, singular vs plural.)

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask :)

Здравствуй, Аарам! 

Вот тебе совет по поводу изучения русского языка:

Лучше не заниматься с носителем языка, который не знает как преподавать, потому-что русским обычно кажется, что они знают как учить русскому, но когда они это пробуют, то у них почему-то ничего не получается :) Я это тебе как русский человек говорю.

Bottom line is – if you want to improve Russian, do it with a teacher. The grammar in Russian is all over the place, and most Russians have no idea how their language works. 

Take this as my two pennies in your education. 

Peace!

Correction:

Как Экономить Деньги