Diary
Today I woke up at 6:00 AM. I drank one cup of coffee and eat mixed eggs for breakfast. At 6:30AM I started to play tennis. After that I went home, tooke a shower and went to my office. After a lot of work, at home about 8PM, had a ligth dinner to eat and went bed because I was too tired.
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Today I woke up at 6:00 AM. I drank one cup of coffee and eat ate mixed eggs for breakfast. At 6:30AM I started to play tennis. After that I went home, tooke took a shower and went to my office.
Now, let's have a look at the last sentence.
After a lot of work, at home at — you need to include a preposition to specify time (like "at 8PM" or "at around 7:30").
about 8PM, I — you need to include a subject in order to form a clause. If the sentence doesn't have a subject and a verb, it is an incomplete sentence.
had a ligth light dinner to eat and went bed because I was too tired.
Finally, we have the sentence:
After a lot of work, at home at about 8PM, I had a ligth light dinner to eat and went bed because I was too tired.
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Diary
Today I woke up at 6:00 AM. I drank one cup of coffee and ate mixed eggs for breakfast. At 6:30 AM I started to play tennis. After that I went home, took a shower and went to my office. After a lot of work, I came home about 8 PM, had a light dinner and went to bed because I was so tired.Very well written!
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Diary
Today I woke up at 6:00 AM. I HADWant to progress faster?
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