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1. 我有两本汉语杂志：一本新的，一本旧的。你需要哪一本？ I have two chinese magazines: one new and one old. Which one do you need?

This sentence is very good, no problem found.

2. 晚上你们去哪儿？ 晚上我们去谢老师看汉语动画片。Where do you go tonight? Tonight I go to teacher Tse to watch chinese cartoons.

谢老师 only means "Teacher Xie (Mrs Xie)", it's a person, not a place. You need to put in " teacher Tse's home“ in chinese, so it should be "谢老师家” 。 “晚上我们去谢老师家看汉语动画片。“

3. 你从哪儿去图书馆？ 从大学吗？ 我从宿舍去，不从大学。Where do you go from to the library? From the university? I go from the dormitory, not from the university.

We can understand well the sentence, but it's not quite colloquial.   We would say ” 你从哪儿去的图书馆？从大学吗？  我从宿舍去的，不是从大学去的。“   this is the structure " 是。。。。的 "  in order to stress on a certain element.

4. 你还他什么？ 我还他两本词典：一本英语的，别一本汉语法语的。What do you give him back? I give him back two dictionaries: one english dictionary, another one is chinese-french dictionary.

It's alright too. But just to help you to be more authentic: for dictionairy, in chinese we would use abbreviations for the two languages. For example, chinese-french dictionary 法汉词典，chinese-english dictionary 英汉词典  etc.

Bon courage!!

课本：course book 课文：text

according to me, 国度 is more poetic than 国家，国家is a neutral word to say country; 伤悲和悲伤are both very literate, we will choose either of them for phonetic consideration, for example, to rythme with the sentence.

Hi, I will leave the right sentences aside and just put my corrections here. 1. 我们都讨厌他，但是谁都不说这个因为我们就害怕。We all hate him, but nobody says that just because we're scared of him 这个句子里面，应该说 ” 我们都讨厌他，但是谁都不说，就因为我们害怕。" 2. 他就累死了。He's just so tired the translation should be : then, (就 is used to introduce the result) he died of fatigue. 3. 这本书我就读过了一些页。I've just read some pages in this book 就，没有问题； 不用“一些”，要用“几”。或者说 “这本书我就读了一点。” 4. 毕业以后我就两次见面我的老师。Since the graduation I've seen my teacher only twice 中文可以说 “毕业以后我就见过我的老师两次。” 或者 “毕业以后我和我的老师就见过两次面” all the rest is very well done! congrats!

仰人鼻息 就是指必须依附在别人的势力范围下生存。 It means depend on sb. 用另一句话解释就是”人在屋檐下，不得不低头“，（When you are standing under the roof, you have to keep your head down")