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    一个冷的天

    “个”是一个量词,一般不用于形容“天”,但是有一种方言、口语说法叫做“个把天”,表示几天。造句:我大概还需要个把天才能结束我的工作。

    这句话怎么改呢……“很冷的一天”

    平常圣保罗是一个热的城市。

    “热”一般不用于形容城市,但是可以用来形容“天气”。

    所以这句话最好改成“圣保罗是个(平常)天气热(气温高)的城市。”
    但是,今天天气冷:11摄氏度。
    明天比今天冷:9摄氏度是最低温度。√这几个句子是对的
    我明天佩戴很热的衣服。我必须记得羊毛袜,羊毛衫。

    可以“佩戴首饰”、“佩戴领结”等等,但是衣服不行。应该是“穿上衣服”

    最后这句话语法是对的,看起来稍微有点奇怪,可以改成“我必须记得穿上羊毛袜、羊毛衫。”

    还有什么问题,都可以来问我哦!

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    Simple sentences confusion 2

    1. 我怕找不着。(i'm afraid can't find it)
    can i say, 我恐怕找不着 ?

    我怕(我)找不着。


    2. 我已经学中文四个月差不多。(i've learned chinese for about 4 months)
    does this sentences means the same? '我学了中文四个月差不多。

    我已经差不多学了中文四个月了。/我学中文已经差不多四个月了。


    3.这几天我比较忙。√(i'm relatively/kinda busy these few days)
    does this sentence means the same?, '这几天我有点儿忙。'√

    事实上,汉语使用者们虽然在口语中经常使用“儿”这个词,但是在书面表达时,并不经常把“儿”字打在上面。


    4. 这儿有不少小偷。√(there are many thieves here)

    does this sentence means the same?, '这儿有几个小偷儿。'有点奇怪



    5. what does the 'er' (儿) means and how to use it?

    我在上面大概解释了一下,具体可以问我哦。

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    下次会做得更好吧 :(

    哦。看起来我最近忘记了写一点儿的事情。这个不好。我想常常写东西。对了,我知道了。我一定要一篇一天一星期写事情(???every week or every day?)。
    。。。
    我希望。。。
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    My Wish:Learn more things Today I finished my last text and that means I am no longer a student in THAT Grade ,I became a better student in a higher grade.I'm very pround of that and also very upset about it.Can I be better?It is my biggest problem right now. So,I am here!I wish to learn more about English(I have learnt some in my school but not good enough yet),and because I am a big fan of WW2's story and (stranely)I like Grmany.Want to learn Deutsch! Are there some guys around there want to learn Chinese ,and he or she is good at English or Deutsch? I HOPE YOU CAN GIVE ME A MESSAGE!
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    距地面三百米的玻璃滑梯开放

    一个非常可怕的滑梯在洛杉矶开放了。滑梯通常(出现)在儿童公园里,可是这个可怕的“天空滑梯”是在大楼外七十层高的地方。为了(让它显得)更可怕,滑梯是由玻璃制成的,只有三厘米厚。滑梯游客(游客吗?)能看到下面三百米下的路。该滑梯在洛杉矶中心的美国银行塔上。建筑滑梯的价格是三百五十万美元。滑梯从第七十层滑到第六十九层。从起点到终点是十五米,滑行只需要五秒。游客必须坐在一个特别安全垫子上,然后从窗户滑下去。一次只能一个人玩。

    大楼的所有者公司的总裁说他们开了很多会讨论大楼应该有的特点。他们想要了特殊的东西。总裁说:“我们应该有其他地方没有的东西。”她又说滑梯足够坚固可以支持一个满载的学校巴士。洛杉矶时报记者形容滑梯说“滑滑梯只是几秒的时间。在你喊叫之前,你已经在安全垫子上滑到了第六十九层外面,”‘天空滑梯’第七十层观光门票成人是二十五美元、三到十二岁的儿童是十九美元。滑滑梯的票另附八美元。

    Glass Slide Opens 300 Metres Above The Street

    A very scary slide has opened to the public in Los Angeles. Slides are usually seen in children's parks, but the scary Skyslide is on the outside of a building, 70 stories high. To make it scarier, the Skyslide is made of glass, which is just 3 cm thick. People who go on it have to look down at the street 300 metres below them. It is part of the U.S. Bank Tower in downtown L.A. It cost $3.5 million to build. The slide starts at the 70th floor and goes down one story to the 69th floor. It is only 15 metres from start to finish and takes about five seconds to get from top to bottom. Riders must sit on a special safety mat and push themselves out of a window. Only one person can go on it at a time.

    The president of the company that owns the building said there were many meetings about what kind of attraction it should have. They wanted something special. The president said: "We have to do something that doesn't exist anywhere else." She said the slide is safe enough to support a school bus filled with people. An L.A. Times reporter spoke about the ride. He said: "The ride takes just a few seconds. Before you can get a really proper scream going, you're launched out onto a safety mat on an outdoor deck on the 69th floor." Tickets to get into the Skyspace area on the 70th floor are $25 for adults and $19 for children aged between 3-12. A ride on the Skyslide costs an additional $8.
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    请帮我纠正错误一下儿

    为什么我要到中国学习汉语, 什么时候我喜欢上这种语言?(this is a question so we use"?")这是个不太简单的问题。原本我要选学有希望的语言(?),所以我读信息得多然后就选汉语(How say : I read about this too much?) (Do you mean“”我读到很多汉语“?)。听说汉语是最难的语言(“语”is  single, so usually we put another beside it,that's better  ),但我想你学习得越多你越明白和喜欢它。我可以说如果你学习努力的话就可以到作为。我知道在俄罗斯很多公司要求汉语的知识,你能开始你的事业用汉语,等等。但我想说我喜欢上汉语不是因为这语言有很多好处,是因为我很喜欢丰富的文化,(you want to say China has them or Chinese has them?)有好的人,独特的气氛。我爱你中国。

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