Is this accurate chinese? Please correct my mistakes.

我不知道如何表达矛盾的情感已经飙升到想通过我的心脏风暴。 感情日益堆积，越来越强烈

简单的介绍我自己。

我很喜欢 “请多关照”这句话。 我觉得很有趣。^.^

30天中文写作挑战 (29/30) – 在布列塔尼旅行

这个周末，我和我男朋友去布列塔尼旅行了。
第一天，我们去了布列塔尼，在海边漫步。
此外，我们也去了参观博物馆，欣赏了关于论战题的讽刺画。
然后我的同事送给了我一个礼品盒.晚上我们是在在毡房里睡觉的。
第二天，我们去了一个海边城市Saint-Malo，然后去了中古城牆。
在那里我们漫步，参观历史博物馆，还在海里浸没了脚。
天气很好， 而且城市很漂亮。
这个周末太高兴，以至于要回家感到很悲伤。



Hi, today is day 29 of my challenge, I am almost there! Today I wanted to talk about my week-end in Britain. Thank you in advance for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

This week-end, my boyfriend and I travelled to Britain. The first day, we went to Dinar, and strolled near the sea coast. We went to a museum that presented some caricature drawings about controversial topics. As my colleagues had offered me a gift box, at night we slept in a yurt. On the second day, we went to Saint-Malo. Saint-Malo, a coastal city with a middle age wall. We walked around, visit a museum of history, and put our foot in the sea. The weather was great and the city was beautiful. This week-end was very pleasant, so we were sad to go back home.

自我介绍。

你好，我是恺丽，我很高兴认识你。

I could not run so fast as you. (没有)
我没有你跑那么快
我没有你跑得那么快
How could he love music so much? (怎么)
他喜欢音乐怎么多?
他怎么会那么喜欢音乐呢？