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30天中文写作挑战 (29/30) – 在布列塔尼旅行 这个周末，男朋友和我在布列塔尼旅行了。 第一天，我们到Dinard去了，在海旁边漫步了。 我们也参观博物馆，介绍讽刺画关于论战题。 因为我的同事送给我一个礼品盒，所以我们晚上在毡房里睡觉了。 第二天，我们去在Saint-Malo，一个海旁边城市，跟中古城牆。 我们漫步了，参观历史博物馆，还在海里浸没了脚。 天气很好， 而且城市很漂亮。 这个周末很高兴，所以回来家悲伤。 Hi, today is day 29 of my challenge, I am almost there! Today I wanted to talk about my week-end in Britain. Thank you in advance for your corrections! Here is the English translation: This week-end, my boyfriend and I travelled to Britain. The first day, we went to Dinar, and strolled near the sea coast. We went to a museum that presented some caricature drawings about controversial topics. As my colleagues had offered me a gift box, at night we slept in a yurt. On the second day, we went to Saint-Malo. Saint-Malo, a coastal city with a middle age wall. We walked around, visit a museum of history, and put our foot in the sea. The weather was great and the city was beautiful. This week-end was very pleasant, so we were sad to go back home.

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30天中文写作挑战 (29/30) – 在布列塔尼旅行

这个周末，我和我男朋友去布列塔尼旅行了。
第一天，我们去了布列塔尼，在海边漫步。
此外，我们也去了参观博物馆，欣赏了关于论战题的讽刺画。
然后我的同事送给了我一个礼品盒.晚上我们是在在毡房里睡觉的。
第二天，我们去了一个海边城市Saint-Malo，然后去了中古城牆。
在那里我们漫步，参观历史博物馆，还在海里浸没了脚。
天气很好， 而且城市很漂亮。
这个周末太高兴，以至于要回家感到很悲伤。



Hi, today is day 29 of my challenge, I am almost there! Today I wanted to talk about my week-end in Britain. Thank you in advance for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

This week-end, my boyfriend and I travelled to Britain. The first day, we went to Dinar, and strolled near the sea coast. We went to a museum that presented some caricature drawings about controversial topics. As my colleagues had offered me a gift box, at night we slept in a yurt. On the second day, we went to Saint-Malo. Saint-Malo, a coastal city with a middle age wall. We walked around, visit a museum of history, and put our foot in the sea. The weather was great and the city was beautiful. This week-end was very pleasant, so we were sad to go back home.
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在布列塔尼旅行

这个周末，男朋友和我（”我和男朋友“is better）在去布列塔尼旅行了。
第一天，我们到Dinard去了，在海旁边（“海边”is a word）漫步了。
我们也参观了博物馆，里面  展示（presented） 了一些 争议性主题（controversial topics） 的 讽刺画（caricature drawings）。
因为我的同事送给我一个礼品盒，所以我们晚上在毡房（I think  毡房 is not the correct translation.帐篷tentage ）里睡觉了。（causal relationship?）
第二天，我们去在了Saint-Malo，——一个海旁边海滨城市，跟中古城牆一个拥有中古城墙的海滨城市。
我们漫步了，参观历史博物馆，还在海里浸没了脚。
天气很好， 而且城市很漂亮（美）。
这个周末很高兴，所以回来家悲伤要回家也有些不舍了。



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30天中文写作挑战 (29/30) – 在布列塔尼旅行

这个周末，男朋友和我在布列塔尼旅行了。
第一天，我们到Dinard去了，在海旁边漫步散步了。
我们也参观了博物馆，介绍讽刺画关于论战题。是介绍关于讽刺论战题的画。
因为我的同事送给我一个礼品盒，所以我们晚上在毡房里睡觉了。
第二天，我们去了在Saint-Malo，一个海旁边城市，跟中古城牆。
我们漫步散步了一会儿，参观了历史博物馆，还在海里浸没泡了脚。
天气很好， 而且城市很漂亮。
这个周末很高兴，所以回来家悲伤。

这个周末玩的很开心，所以回家的路上感觉有点不舍。



Hi, today is day 29 of my challenge, I am almost there! Today I wanted to talk about my week-end in Britain. Thank you in advance for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

This week-end, my boyfriend and I travelled to Britain. The first day, we went to Dinar, and strolled near the sea coast. We went to a museum that presented some caricature drawings about controversial topics. As my colleagues had offered me a gift box, at night we slept in a yurt. On the second day, we went to Saint-Malo. Saint-Malo, a coastal city with a middle age wall. We walked around, visit a museum of history, and put our foot in the sea. The weather was great and the city was beautiful. This week-end was very pleasant, so we were sad to go back home.

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30天中文写作挑战 (29/30) – 在布列塔尼旅行

这个周末，我和我男朋友去布列塔尼旅行了。
第一天，我们去了dinar，在海边漫步。
我们也参观了一个博物馆，里面展览了一些颇有争议的讽刺画。
因为我的同事送给我一个礼品盒，所以我们晚上在毡房里睡觉了。
第二天，我们去在Saint-Malo，一个海旁边城市，跟中古城牆差不多。
我们四处走了走了，参观历史博物馆，还把脚浸在海水里
天气很好， 而且城市很漂亮。
这个周末很高兴，所以回家是有些悲伤。



Hi, today is day 29 of my challenge, I am almost there! Today I wanted to talk about my week-end in Britain. Thank you in advance for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

This week-end, my boyfriend and I travelled to Britain. The first day, we went to Dinar, and strolled near the sea coast. We went to a museum that presented some caricature drawings about controversial topics. As my colleagues had offered me a gift box, at night we slept in a yurt. On the second day, we went to Saint-Malo. Saint-Malo, a coastal city with a middle age wall. We walked around, visit a museum of history, and put our foot in the sea. The weather was great and the city was beautiful. This week-end was very pleasant, so we were sad to go back home.
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我们也参观博物馆，介绍讽刺画关于论战题。


”我们参观了一个 展示 关于 富有争议性 议题 讽刺画的博物馆。“    

the structure of the object part：“展示 。。。的博物馆”

如果觉得句子太长，变成两个短句也可以：

“我们参观了一个博物馆，里面展出的是 富有争议性 议题的讽刺画。”  

the structure of the object complement clause ：“展出的是。。。的讽刺画”



Hi, today is day 29 of my challenge, I am almost there! Today I wanted to talk about my week-end in Britain. Thank you in advance for your corrections! Here is the English translation:

This week-end, my boyfriend and I travelled to Britain. The first day, we went to Dinar, and strolled near the sea coast. We went to a museum that presented some caricature drawings about controversial topics. As my colleagues had offered me a gift box, at night we slept in a yurt. On the second day, we went to Saint-Malo. Saint-Malo, a coastal city with a middle age wall. We walked around, visit a museum of history, and put our foot in the sea. The weather was great and the city was beautiful. This week-end was very pleasant, so we were sad to go back home.

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