Please help me to revise it.Thank you. What is tradition?What is tradition reflected in our life?And how do we understand the popularity of Tang suit and cheongsam?Building roof reappears from time to time,the palace museum and costume play are gradually integrated into the culture in our life,ancient classics are put into the libraries and the literary bookshelves.All of these explain the relationship between tradition and our life.What is tradition,it is a kind of knowledge.Tradition is a natural,which is also formed by osmosis and gradually standardized in long time.The core of the tradition is the attitude of life.We will be confused without tradition on some occasions,especially when facing to big events in life.

Laugh As the rain gradually stopped,a beam of light filtered into the room through the curtain.I opened the window and looked out.Ah,the rain clouds had vanished and the remaining raindrops on the tree leaves glistened tremulously under the moonlight like myriads of fireflies.I had never thought there was such a beautiful sight after the miserable rain under the lonely light. Standing at the window,I felt a bit chilly.When I turned around,I was dazzled suddenly.Everything in the room was blurred by the haze of light. The angel in the picture on the wall was covered by a dim light ,the one in white dress holding flowers and flapping her wings with a smile for me.

I want this article to be beautiful,not just without syntax errors. Before ill, I was spoiled by my parents and acted like an overlord at home .Once i was isolated and confined to a small house on the hillside of the garden,i suddenly felt like being in limbo and was very frustrated.One spring evening with all flowers in the garden bloomed together,my parents held a garden party .A crowd of guests gathered,chatting and laughing.In the small house on the hillside,I quietly lifted the curtain,only to see a prosperous world in the garden with my old brothers and sisters and my cousins walking among the guests,bursting with happiness.All at once,the loneliness and grief came in waves so that I couldn’t help crying.

:) :):):) How can we balance the significance of our life up to any standards?Although it is difficult to put forward an absolutely standard,that will be easier to make an appropriate estimate of the meaning of the person’s existence when you know one’s attitude towards life ,and how does the person treat his work. From ancient to modern times,all successful people were very serious about their lives.They always make full use of time to work and study as much as possible,as long as they are still alive.And so it was with the toilers,the great statesmen and ideologists etc in the history of our country.

Give some suggestions? The river bend was basking in the glare of sunset.It was difficult to tell where the floating clouds began and where the river bend ended. Besides this picturesque scene,near the bank of the Yellow River,a flock of sheep were grazing with their heads bending low.Yet none of them seemd to came about this beautiful scenery of dusk,perhaps they were to busy with what they did,trying to capture one last monthful of grass before returning home.The shepherd was nowhere to be found ,perhaps taking a nap somewhere.So these eerie things were left all alone by themselves in enjoying the dusk and sunset.The fertile grass of the water land had enabled them to be plump and stong.And if you came nearer,you could see their glaring white teeth and rich innocent expression.