Jerry Maguire

It is a good movie indeed. It is inspiring and the way it tells its story is old fashioned but intriguing. (Good job, just swap out the comma with a period.)

It is about an a sport player agent who is successful but finds the way sport agents treating those  treat the signed players is wrong; he thinks/feels that agents should pay more attention and care on for them in case they get injured and most importantly they are humans as well, they have their families.

He decides to write a note and make copies to distribute to others who are also in this industry, which he did and gets fired and humiliated in front of his colleagues by his boss; it also comes with breaking up with his girlfriend as well as bankruptcy he is about to encounter . By the  that time there are only two people are willing to trust him, which are a colleague of him  his who admires what he have  has done about by pointing out the ugly truth of this industy industry, and an NFL player who has signed with him and decides to follow him even though he is out of the company.

And the story goes on, you have to watch it by yourself if you are interested in my brief introduction.

After watching this movie I have to say that Tom Cruise has barely age aged a day! Maybe a little bit but I mean there is a slighly diffrence  only a slight difference compared to his presence  appearance now. You would be surprised if you have seen what other actors look like during these years.

Good job overall, Nick. Some of the tenses were incorrect, and some words were used a bit awkwardly, but other than that you have a good grasp of written English! And yes I agree - I think Tom Cruise might be immortal or something.

Overall, this is very good Ryan! Just a few minor corrections:

consent - He never consented to hang out with his friends, since his friends were all drug smugglers.

venture - Since the only [remove "few"] countries we share diplomatic relations with are in Metro America, we have more business ventures with them than in other regions.

overflow - The waiter was so tired, [remove "that"] he made the glass overflow without noticing it.

indifferent - He's very indifferent to his surroundings. He never pays attention. (You could remove "to it")

harness - If you can't harness what you have, then you won't reach anything.

impair - His arm injury has impaired his forehand, making him retire from the game. (Good!)

reign - Discombobulation reigned over the crowd after the massacre shooting.

sloppy - Textese language seems sloppy when talking to someone crucial. ("Important" might be a better word here.)

intrigue - Throughout history, the Pyramids have intrigued the world by the question of how they were built for [remove "over"] centuries.

provocative - In order to gain exposure to the public, protests often have provocative behaviors or slogans. (Good)