Winter running
Today is the first time I ran outside this year. The weather was cold and windy and there was high humidity. I ran 6 kilometers and I was really pleased about it. I stopped thinking about the wind, the wet feet and the cold. I just ran. And finally I felt warmth in my body, pleasure heaviness in my legs and happiness. These are really nice feelings. I like the people who can run all year long. I hope I will able to do it too. I want to run ten kilometers this year and try to run the Minsk half marathon.
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Winter running
Today is the first time I ran outside this year. The weather was cold and windy and there was high humidity. I ran 6 kilometers and I was really pleased about it. I stopped thinking about the wind, the wet feet and the cold. I just ran. And finally I felt warmth in my body, pleasure havyness (heaviness?) in my legs and happiness. These are really nice feelings. I like the people who can run all year long. I hope I will able to do it too. I want to run ten kilometers this year and try to run the Minsk half marathon.I think this is good overall! Most of the issues are with the grammar.
"Stopped my thoughts" is not incorrect, but it sounds awkward. "Stopped thinking" is a better way to say it.
Remember that with adjectives that end in "-y", such as happy and heavy - the Y becomes an I when turning them into a noun (i.e., heaviness, happiness, shoddiness, etc.).
Good luck with your running! 10 Kilos is an excellent goal to strive for.
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Winter running
Today I first time ran outside in this year. (another solution: Today I ran outside for the first time this year) The weather was cold, windy and it was high humidity.(another solution: ...and it was really wet) I ran 6 kilometers and I was really pleased about it. I stopped my thoughts about the wind, the wet feet and cold. I just ran. And finally I felt warm in my body, pleasure heaviness in my legs and happieness. These are really nice feelings. I like the people who can run all the year. I hope I will able to do it too. I want to run ten kilometers in this year and try to run Minsk half marathon.Want to progress faster?
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