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Jerry Maguire I just watched the movie Jerry Maguire which is an old movie for my age. I have heard about this movie for my entire life so that I decided to give it a shot. I used to not a big fan of old movies because I though they sometimes are ralatively boring and slow paced as well as the low definition.

It is a good movie indeed, it is inspiring and the way it tells its story is old fashioned but intriguing.

It is about an sport player agent who is successful but finds the way sport agents treating those signed players is wrong, agents should pay more attention and care on them in case they get injured and most importantly they are humans as well, they have their families.

He decides to write a note and make copies to distribute to others who are also in this industry, which he did and gets fired and humiliated in front of his colleagues by his boss, it also comes with breaking up with his girlfriend as well as bankruptcy he is about to encounter . By the time there are only two people are willing to trust him, which are a colleague of him who admires what he have done about pointing out the ugly truth of this industy and an NFL player who has signed with him and decides to follow him even though he is out of the company.

And the story goes on, you have to watch it by yourself if you are interested in my brief introduction.

After watching this movie I have to say that Tom Cruise has barely age a day! Maybe a little bit but I mean there is a slighly diffrence compared to his presence now. You would be surprised if you have seen what other actors look like during these years.

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Jerry Maguire

I just watched the movie Jerry Maguire which is an old movie for my age. I have heard about this movie for my entire life so that  I decided to give it a shot. I used to not a big fan of old movies because I though  thought they sometimes are ralatively  relatively boring and slow paced as well as the low definition (perhaps "and they have low definition" would be better).

It is a good movie indeed. It is inspiring and the way it tells its story is old fashioned but intriguing. (Good job, just swap out the comma with a period.)

It is about an a sport player agent who is successful but finds the way sport agents treating those  treat the signed players is wrong; he thinks/feels that agents should pay more attention and care on for them in case they get injured and most importantly they are humans as well, they have their families.

He decides to write a note and make copies to distribute to others who are also in this industry, which he did and gets fired and humiliated in front of his colleagues by his boss; it also comes with breaking up with his girlfriend as well as bankruptcy he is about to encounter . By the  that time there are only two people are willing to trust him, which are a colleague of him  his who admires what he have  has done about by pointing out the ugly truth of this industy industry, and an NFL player who has signed with him and decides to follow him even though he is out of the company.

And the story goes on, you have to watch it by yourself if you are interested in my brief introduction.

After watching this movie I have to say that Tom Cruise has barely age aged a day! Maybe a little bit but I mean there is a slighly diffrence  only a slight difference compared to his presence  appearance now. You would be surprised if you have seen what other actors look like during these years.

Good job overall, Nick. Some of the tenses were incorrect, and some words were used a bit awkwardly, but other than that you have a good grasp of written English! And yes I agree - I think Tom Cruise might be immortal or something.


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