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¡Hola a todos! Yo soy estudiante y quiero aprender más español. Hablo inglés y puedo ayudarte si puedes ayudarme con mi español. :) Me gusta viajar, leer, y por supuesto, conectar con muchas personas.
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    have to and must

    I have to turn left here.
    My girlfriend <s>have</s> has to go to the office every morning <s>to the office</s>.
    I have to go to the supermarket to buy fruit.
    To buy fresh vegetables I must go to a farmer's market.
    <em>(You can also say "In order to buy fresh vegetables I must go to a farmer's market" or "I must go to a farmer's market (in order) to buy fresh vegetables." All of these options are equally correct). </em>
    I have to drink every day. OR I must drink every day.


    Good job, Yousef! Keep up the good work :)
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    May 27, 2020
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    Essay about the role of satire in the society

    Nowadays satire is a very controversial topic, because people like it only if it is not about them.
    In other words, people appreciate satire, but only when it's about people and
    social habits they do not like.
    The problem comes when the subject of the joke changes and they become the subject of the joke, they will get offended.*
    Personally, I think I am one of those people because i like satire only if it is witty.
    That means I do not appreciate when a satirist uses stereotypes as a subject or makes sexist comments.
    I want to be honest, sometimes I find these kinds of jokes funny as well. My opinion changes when I realize the reason of my laughter, at that point the joke does not make me laugh anymore.*
    Maybe that is exacly the purpose of satire, but the point is that it is based on the common idea of people being inferior to someone else for an unspecific reason.
    That is why, in my opinion, it is important to think about the reason why we laugh about a joke or not.
    Because although it can appear innocent, or we do not hurt anyone, the real problem is the idea of the person, social class or whatever, that is behind the joke or comment.
    However, I do not get offended because I think there are things which are more important.
    For example, last summer there was an earthquake in a region of Italy. At that time there was an image on the internet of italian people with spaghetti among the ruins of the buildings.
    At the beginning, I was quite impressed, but then I realized there was no point in complaining about an image on the internet.
    In conclusion, a joke is just a joke.


    *Here, I would say "people get offended when they become the subject of the joke" instead.

    *I would instead say "when I realize the subject of the joke, it's not funny to me anymore."


    I'm very impressed with your English. I could understand everything you were trying to say! Good job and keep up the great work!

    -Mallory :)

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    June 21, 2017
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    Mi Primer Vuelo Hoy fue mi primer vuelo en mi vida. Al principio, yo tenía miedo. Sin embargo, después los primeros minutos, me enamoré. Vi el mundo en una nueva manera. Bueno, más sobre mi vuelo más tarde. Empecé este día en la casa de mi amiga Elizabeth. Pasé la noche allí y sus padres cocinaron un desayuno muy grande para nosotras. Mis amigas Cassie, Jodi, y Victoria pasaron la noche allí también. Nos levantamos a las cinco porque teníamos que ser a la iglesia a la cinco y media. Mis padres llegaron a la iglesia y me dijeron adíos. Tomamos una foto y salíamos por el aeropuerto. Dormí por casi dos horas hasta llegamos al aeropuerto. En este momento, me puse nerviosa porque sabía que en menos de dos horas, sería sentado en un avión. Fuimos por la seguridad y después fuimos a la puerta. Pusimos nuestras maletas allí y fui a encontrar comida. No tenía mucho hambre, así que bebí un smoothie muy caro (porque aeropuertos son absurdos). Regresé a nuestra puerta y empecemos a llenar el avión. Bajé en el avión y vi solo tres asientos. ¡Cada fila tenía solo tres asientos! Sentí muy claustrofóbica y pedí a mi amiga si pudiera tener el asiento de la ventana. Cambiamos asientos y sentí mucho mejor. Los primeros minutos fueron horribles y aterradores. Sin embargo, cuando empecemos a volar, mi mundo cambió por siempre.
    June 21, 2017
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    A Little practice!

    Dear friend,
    Last week I was in at dinner whit with Carlos. could be Perhaps you remember him because both of you spoke a lot in Italian in our last meeting. Also recall that you offered me some free classes for next summer, this because I have been planning my vacations in Italy.

    I am wondering if you have able time to teach me some words for to survive! I need a basic things like a how to ask for food, addresses, drinks or accommodations . You could even give me a few tips on how to speed up my Italian learning. I was thinking to take of taking a rush curse crash course in on the internet, but I can’t find a basic level that contains English explanations, may be if you know a teacher please send the contact number.

    Let me know if you can assist me and what you think about all of my suggestions. I hope to see you at some point soon.
    All the best,
    W.M.

    Very good job! I could understand the points you were trying to communicate, which is the most important part of learning languages! Keep up the good work!


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    May 12, 2017
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    Mi Clase de Español ¡Hola a todos! Usualmente, me encanta aprender español. Siempre no es fácil, pero me disfruto el idioma. Sin embargo, hoy fue un día muy horrible. Mi maestra empezó su lección con el subjuntivo, un tema muy difícil para mí. Después de eso, practicamos todos de los tensos diferentes. Fue imposible a decidir que tenso a usar. Bueno, supongo que los tensos vayan ser más fácil después de los estudio. ¡Gracias por leyendo sobre mi día! -Mallory :)
    May 12, 2017
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    Mi Primera Lección con LingQ Hoy escuché a una lección de LingQ. Era mi primera lección con LingQ y me gusté mucho. Creo que es muy importante ver las palabras mientras estas escuchando el audio. Hace tres y medio años estudio español y es todavía difícil entender hablantes nativos. El otro día, estaba orgullosa de mi español y traté leer Harry Potter en español. ¡No podria hacerlo! Supongo que necesite continuar a escuchar los hablantes nativos y leer cosas más fáciles. ¡Espero que tengas un buen día, y gracias por leer mi entrada!
    February 20, 2017
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    Technology in the learning process

    The reading and the lecture<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font></strike> are both about how far the technology has been implemented in order to boost academic achievements, which is related to the<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike> using </strike>use</font> of different devices (like computers and wireless technology) to complement the learning process. Both<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font></strike> the lecturer and the author of the reading<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font></strike> talk about the benefits and advantages of the technology <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>at </strike>in</font> classrooms, and both talk about issues in the implementation.

    First of all, the author of the reading claims that<strike> the benefits offered by the technology are several</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">there are many benefits offered by technology</font> because it can allow students to have different learning styles due to the variety of available tools. Also<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> teachers can expand the boundaries of the classroom, allowing students<font style="background-color: yellow;"> to</font> exchange ideas with other students around the world. In contrast, the lecturer mentions that after some programs implemented by the educational system<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font></strike> in order to integrate the technology in the learning process, the use of computers and software may lead to students <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>achieve</strike> achieving</font> higher scores during the exams, <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>in contrast with</strike> as opposed to the </font> students that did not use technology during the learning process.

    Secondly, the author states that <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">in</font></strike> despite <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">of</font></strike> the advantages given by <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">the</font></strike> technology, <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>this one</strike> it</font> has to be fully integrated. He argues that less than <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font></strike> half of teachers use technology throughout the learning process, and those who use computers<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">, they</font></strike> use them to do things that can be done using pencil and paper. The lecturer supports this argument. He mentions that <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">some</font></strike> years ago, a survey <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>made</strike> given </font> to 100 schools revealed that 96% of teachers developed basic skills in computers, but it was not addressed for teaching. 78% had a brief capacitation (less than 5 hours). 65% were not comfortable using technology. He mentions that according to the survey and the commentaries given by some professors, the technology was not <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>helping</strike> helpful</font> and that resource<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font> should be invested in other educational needs.

    In conclusion, the lecture effectively supports the main claims and theories presented in the reading.
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    February 20, 2017
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    Sentences - "fancy / to fancy sth" and "get dressed up"

    Do you think that she fancies me?

    Do you fancy the idea to celebrate my birthday?

    I am getting dressed up to go to the party.


    Can someone give me more examples, please? Thank you.

     

    ¡Hola, Jésus! Si quieres la verdad, en los Estados Unidos, no usamos la frase "to fancy." Yo que tu, usaría la frase "to like." 

    Por ejemplo:

    Do you think she likes me?

    Would you like to celebrate my birthday with me?

    Do you think Bill likes going to the movies?

    Sin embargo, uso la palabra "fancy" como un adjetivo.

    Por ejemplo:

    Her dress is super fancy.

    The restaurant we went to last night was fancy. 

    Por supuesto, hablo  inglés Americano. Si quieres aprender inglés de Inglaterra el comentario antes de mío es un buen herramiento.

    La frase "dress up" es muy importante.

    I got dressed up for the dance last night.

    She got dressed up for her date with her boyfriend.

    La frase "dress up" significa algo más formal que solo "dress."

    Por ejemplo:

    I got dressed for school this morning.

    Johnathan got dressed to go to track practice.

    ¡Espero que este sea útil!

    -Mallory :) 

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    February 20, 2017
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    Aprendiendo Español ¡Hola a todos! Hoy fue la primera día que pude entender mi maestra de español totalmente (era muy emocianada!) Pero, estoy un poquito frustrada porque puedo entender que mi maestra está diciendo, pero no puedo decir que quiero decir. No sé si no tengo vocabulario suficiente, pero es desalentador. Puedo recordar mucho vocabulario cuando mi maestra me pregunta, "Qué significa 'calle' o 'trabajar,'" pero es muy díficil producir la lengua cuando estoy hablando. En otras noticias, yo comencé a mirar un nuevo programa de televisión en Netflix. Se llama "Velvet" y me gusta el programa mucho. Es muy interesante, pero vi solo cinco episodios. Mi programa favorito fue sacado de Netflix, "El Gran Hotel", y era muy triste. Puedo decir que viendo televisión en la lengua que estás aprendiendo es muy útil, porque el otro día estaba hablando con mi maestra de español y yo dije palabras y frases que no sabía, pero fue natural. ¡Gracias por leyendo mi entrada y espero que tengas un buen día!
    November 29, 2016
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    Personal statement draft

    My interest in computer science comes from childhood. When I was a child I liked to draw and paint, I spent hours between markers, crayons and pencils filling with draws pages and pages pages and pages with drawings... My parents bought our first computer when I was six, and that new object seemed to me almost magical to me. I completely changed from using crayons by to using the computer. Now I regret this because my drawing skills isn’t aren't good at all. Nevertheless, this showed me hundreds of possibilities.  Using all the components of the computer: The mouse, the screen, the keyboard and the computer became a hobby which did not cost me to get used. I investigated by myself, little by little, the possibilities offered by this extraordinary machine, and ever since then my interest has been increasing.
    Throughout my life, I had clear knew for certain that I should continue studying, and the university offered me a wide range of possibilities, although what was not clear is what I wanted to choose. In high school I chose social sciences, so I could not choose computer science. Nothing convinced interested me until I had discovered the career information and Documentation, and I do not regret choosing these degree. Over the years, I have learned many different and interesting things, from how to catalog and organize a library, repair a damaged book, and even how to recovery and creating databases to maintaining a scientific blog. Last year I had made a blog dedicated to weather issues, it was a pleasant experience. I really had really enjoyed it, therefore I knew that this was what I wanted dedicate myself professionally. The next step was to learn the basics for web pages, and I could research my objective. I'm very perseverant and hard-working, moreover when I want something I do not stop until I get it. That's my goal and I plan to get it, and if I want to work in this, I need to improve my skills in the design and management of content. This master is what I need to complete my training. The University of Greenwich has all the characteristics I look for a university. It has prestige, excellent location, next to the south of the Thames. I’m very interested in London discover new places. Unfortunately, I had not traveled since 2008, and if I am admitted to the master, it will help me to be more independent, outgoing, and maybe the most important, financially independent of my parents. I honestly feel that I have the qualifications needed for the master, I have good honors in degree, I’m good in teamwork, and I can assure that I’m very motivated to start a new life in London.


    I could only critique the first part of your entry (my corrections were too long- I'm sorry!)

    Things marked in blue are suggestions. 

    Overall, great job!

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    October 9, 2016
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