An email to a customers who has placed an order.

Dear David,

This is Jolie from ABC.

Thank you for purchasing our iPhone 7 PLUS waterproof case on Amazon. I hope you will enjoy using it. For easier using For more help using the iPhone 7 PLUS waterproof case, here are some tips that may you may find helpful:

1.Although we did performed a rigorous waterproof test before delivery, it still has there is still the possibility of a it leaking after a long periods of transportation, therefore we recommend to performing a waterproof test without the phone before using.
2.Someone Some people may feel it is find it difficult to open the cover. with the tool to keep aligned with the north at the right bottom. rotate 90℃. then the cover is opened. Using the tool provided, insert into the right bottom corner, rotate 90℃, and the cover will open.
(2.Someone may feel it is difficult to open the cover, with the tool to rotate the groove 90 degree it can easily opened.)

If there are any concerns with your order, please contact us at any time, and we will do what we can to make it right. We are here to make sure you receive the best customer service and are 100% happy with your purchase.

Your Sincerely,
Jolie Harris from ABC

my dear

Actually, I just want to know whether you feel comfortable or not, whether you are busy or not, whether you are happy or not, no something nothing else.

A little bit of feeling

I want to go for a walk and see all over travel and see the world. Perhaps in the near future, I'll be on your side in the same place as you!The world is so big and we are so small. This is the life is beautiful so let's enjoy the present life well, Thanks for everything! ^ _ *

How does living in Beijing compare with living in Shanghai?

I have lived in Beijing for 3 years and Shanghai for more than 5 years. Both of Beijing and Shanghai are great, but they differ in some aspects.

Culture:
Beijing is has been the culture & political center of China for hundreds of years, So so it is well protected. As a result, it’s more conservative compared to other cities such as Shanghai, and Shenzhen.
Shanghai is a port city, geographically smaller than Beijing, but slightly more populous. The living style in Shanghai is modern, dedicated (not sure what you mean by dedicated) and a little superficial(some Chinese call it ‘小资’).

Attractions:
You can find lots a lot of attractions in Beijing which represent the Qing & Ming dynasty, such as the Forbidden City, Tian'anmen (Gate of Heavenly Peace), and The Great Wall.
The Bund would be the most famous attraction in Shanghai, you can walk through Nanjing Road to get there. It’s near the Huangpu river, full of historical buildings in mid-century style. Also, you can enjoy the beautiful skyline studded with glittering new skyscrapers on the opposite side of the river.

Food:
You can almost find whatever find almost anything you want to eat in both two cities for their in terms of diversity in of food, but the dishes are biased differentiated by their flavor and style. In Beijing, the staple foods would be are noodles, steamed buns, pancakes or something made by wheat powder, and in Shanghai, most of people would prefer rice. And As for the flavor, the dishes in Beijing are more salty, besides, and in Shanghai, they are more sweet.

People in Shanghai socialize with others in bars, cafes. In Beijing, people would prefer meeting friends in some at a barbecue restaurants.

Accommodation:
The price for accommodation is high for in both cities due to their expensive high house prices and big large populations. Renting a 40 square meters’ apartment in downtown would cost you more than 4000 RMB( $608 US. dollars ). There are some restrictions to buying a houses in both cities. For example, one of the rules is continuous tax payment for more than 3 years. (not clear what you mean by that)

A foreigner Has a Big Dog and Like to Order Take-out

About a month ago, I found a foreigner has moved into to my had moved in next door. When I first met him, I did not know that he is was a foreigner the first time I met him. The One night when we were going to bed, the power in the building went off. I opened my door to find out what had happened. At the moment, I heard a voice asked asking "Is it power off?" in Chinese. Because I did not I wasn't wearing my glasses then, at the time, so I could only figure a hear a man who spoke speak, but did could not recognize his appearance. Neither Nor did I think he is was a foreigner, indeed also due to his not bad speaking of good spoken mandarin. It is was not a surprise for to me because he is to see a foreigner. There have been foreigners in our neighborhood before. The most scared scariest thing for me, and others, is was his pet, a big dog. What kind of dog, I do not know. But it is was really very big, as high as to my waist. I am really scared to see it. It made me very scared.
Another favorite thing he likes to do is to order take-out take-aways online. I have met so many deliverymen to who deliver foods to him, sometime in the day, sometime in the at night.

不错，I think the most consistent error was the tenses. Because you are telling a story in the past, you should be using the past tense, for example "was" instead of "is".

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