A foreigner Has a Big Dog and Like to Order Take-out
About a month ago, I found a foreigner has moved into to my next door. I did not know he is a foreigner the first time I met him. The night when we were going to bed, the power in the building went off. I opened my door to find what had happened. At the moment, I heard a voice asked "Is it power off?" in Chinese. Because I did not wear my glass then, so I could only figure a man who spoke, but did not recognize his appearance. Neither did I think he is a foreigner indeed also due to his not bad speaking of mandarin. It is no surprise for me because he is a foreigner. There have been foreigners in our neighborhood. The most scared thing for me and others is his pet, a big dog. What kind of dog I do not know. But it is really very big, as high as to my waist. I am really scared to see it.
Another favorite thing he like is to order take-out online. I have met so many deliverymen to deliver foods to him, sometime in the day, sometime in the night.
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A foreigner Has a Big Dog and Like to Order Take-out
About a month ago, I found a foreigner has moved into to my had moved in next door. When I first met him, I did not know that he is was a foreigner the first time I met him. The One night when we were going to bed, the power in the building went off. I opened my door to find out what had happened. At the moment, I heard a voice asked asking "Is it power off?" in Chinese. Because I did not I wasn't wearing my glasses then, at the time, so I could only figure a hear a man who spoke speak, but did could not recognize his appearance. Neither Nor did I think he is was a foreigner, indeed also due to his not bad speaking of good spoken mandarin. It is was not a surprise for to me because he is to see a foreigner. There have been foreigners in our neighborhood before. The most scared scariest thing for me, and others, is was his pet, a big dog. What kind of dog, I do not know. But it is was really very big, as high as to my waist. I am really scared to see it. It made me very scared.Another favorite thing he likes to do is to order take-out take-aways online. I have met so many deliverymen to who deliver foods to him, sometime in the day, sometime in the at night.
不错，I think the most consistent error was the tenses. Because you are telling a story in the past, you should be using the past tense, for example "was" instead of "is".
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