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Dear Diana (Thx!!!) Dear Diana: Hey, shawty! I’m here to invite you to watch a Peking opera. As you are not here, I choose to leave a message to let you know everything about it. Trust me that this charming opera will illuminate your heart without a doubt! Don't worry about your ticket because I have bought it for you. The opera will start at 7 p.m. so I'll make your appointment at the entrance. By the way, from the school gate, No.3 bus is always heading straight to the theater. So why don't you just take it? keeping up with Chinese cultures is definitely a great pleasure. I can make a bet that this is what you have been seeking for inner amazement. Let's just love this fancy thrill and enjoy ourselves tonight! Katherine

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Dear Diana (Thx!!!)

Dear Diana:
Hey, shawty! I’m hereI I would like to invite you to watch a Peking opera. As you are not here, I choose to leave a message to let you know everything all about it. Trust Believe me, that this charming opera will undoubtedly illuminate your heart without a doubt!
Don't worry about your buying a ticket, because I have bought it one for you. The opera will starts at 7 p.m. so I'll make your appointment at the entrance. By the way, from the school gate, the No.3 bus is always heading heads straight to the theater. So why don't you just take it? So you might as well take it!
keeping up with Chinese cultures is definitely a great pleasure.I think you will find keeping up with Chinese cultures immensely rewarding, and I can make a bet that this will help you find the inner fulfilment you have been searching for. is what you have been seeking for inner amazement. Let's just love this fancy thrill Let's have a great time tonight and enjoy ourselves tonight!
Katherine


I've reworded several sections to make it sound more natural. Also, not sure why you're referring to your friend as "shawty"? You can use this jokingly, but it is more commonly used by African Americans, especially in rap videos...


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