please help me to correct my writing, thank you in advance. Dear Professor Wang, My name is Guangyu and I was enrolled in a four-month advanced English training in New Century College, which is a part-time evening course, twice a week from last month to August. I am writing to inform you that there is an unexpected change in my work. I am a full-time civil engineer working for Beijing Damei Real Estate Company. Yesterday the director of my department informed me that the company decides to send me to Shanghai branch for a new project for three month. Therefore, I would not be available to attend all the rest courses. It is a pity and quite a loss to me to quit the study. I wonder if you could help me to postpone my course to the next semester for me to continue my study when I come back from Shanghai. Otherwise, if I must quit, could you kindly to help me to refund part of my tuition fee. Thank you and look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Guangyu it is an ielts writing task, at least 150 wrods are required.

please help me to correct it, thank you in advance. Dear Bob, I am very sorry to hear that you were bothered so much by the noise from my house these days. I do apologize for your suffering and I will fix the problem as soon as I can. A piece of water pipe in my bathroom was leaking last week. Because it is underneath the concrete floor, I have to drill some holes on the floor for inspection with my drilling machine which caused too much noise by that time. Luckily the broken part has been found yesterday. In order to finish this repair work efficiently, I have contacted with a local construction company and they will send some professional plumbers to fix it. AS we discussed, some advanced engineering methods would be taken to avoid too much cutting and drilling works which could mainly cause noise. I think all repairing work could be finished this afternoon and no more noise will trouble you any longer. Please take my sincere apologies on this issue. Best regards, Guangyu

Ielts writing practice 0606, please help me to make a correction. Thanks a lot in advance. Dear Bob and Jane, How is everything going these days? I hope it would be fine with all of you. Thank you again for your kindly hospitalities and helps during the tour in Australia last month. I have received those fantastic photos you took for us yesterday. Certainly it will become the most precious memories of this trip. We have just moved to a new apartment last week, which is located in the CBD area and quite near to my office. It took us the whole weekend to clean everything up. Sorry to reply you so late. There are three bedrooms in our new apartment and it is only 5 minutes walking distance to the central subway station which is a easy connection to most scenery attractions and famous historic relics in the city. I know both of you are interested in Chinese traditional architectures, and hope you to visit us in Beijing soon. Look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Guangyu

Could I write it like this ? Broken wings Went out of the arena with a bitter disappointment Eliminated again before the second round Hardly to win even one set Do not know what to do Cheer up, Go Go Fun-to-you I wrote this after we lose the match in an ameture badminton tournament, and the name of our team is Fun-to-you. I do not know if I could write it like this with short and uncomplete sentences. Please help me to correct it.

Ielts writing task, please help me to correct it, thank you. Dear Bob, I am so excited to tell you that I got a new job in Dada Investment Company recently. As you know that the traffic jams are so heavy and it took me two hours to go to the office when I worked for the last company. I was so frustrated by that time, but now I am no more suffering. The new office is only three kilometers away from my home. Dada is a local company mainly on real estate fields. I was offered a position of the director of marketing department and there are eight colleagues in my team. The main responsibility is to make feasibility analysis, which is quite important for the company to make a thoughtful decision, for all the new projects. I also want to inform you that I am going to attend a reunion party in Shanghai with my classmates next month. Helpfully I may have chance to visit your house. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards. Guangyu

Please help me to correct this writing, thank you. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my deep concern in connection with the news about the Beijing International Airport’s redevelopment plan which is reported in Beijing Daily yesterday. I am Guangyu and I have been living in Dongheng residence for more than ten years, which is only 5 kilometers away from the airport. Airplanes could cause numerous noise during taking off and landing. Especially in the night, Sometimes I could not fall asleep until 1:00 or 2:00 am when is air traffic is lighten somehow. As I know, most people who live in our neighbourhood are suffering the same problem as mine. Secondly, there are heavy traffic jams in the highway which connect the airport and the city centre in the morning and evening. It will take us extra one hour to struggle to go to the office or go home. I understand that airplane could bring us lots of convenience and help us save time, but living in such a noisy environment can really cause much harm to our health, such as hearing or nervous system diseases. What I am worrying about is the redevelopment plan of the airport could make the situation even worse, so I object this plan. Before the government takes any further decision, I suggest that a comprehensive environmental affection research must be done in advance. It is responsibility of media to appeal the government make more efforts and measures to let our living environment better and better. Thanks and looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Guangyu