Could I write it like this ? Broken wings Went out of the arena with a bitter disappointment Eliminated again before the second round Hardly to win even one set Do not know what to do Cheer up, Go Go Fun-to-you I wrote this after we lose the match in an ameture badminton tournament, and the name of our team is Fun-to-you. I do not know if I could write it like this with short and uncomplete sentences. Please help me to correct it.