My first writing essay
Hi, I'm Felipe from Chile and I'm very excited to learn English right now. I hope somebody could help
by giving me feedback about my writing essay as I will do
for other learners with the intention to improve their Spanish skills.
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It's said that when someone is sick, a cup of hot water with honey will sooth all the bad symptoms, but what does honey
really do for your body? I read an article about a list of all
of the advantages of honey and why it is important to dilute it with water to get most out of its benefits.
Honey's medical reputation stems from its antibacterial feature. Even though
it's common to find bacteria in sweet environments, honey's properties prevent this proliferation because of its scant amount of water and oxygen. Besides this, honey also has some acids that prevent the growth of some bacteria. When honey is mixed with water
it allows some bacteria to flourish, but here is the main and most important fact: it only allows the growth of bacteria that are helpful for the human body while killing off dangerous strains. This is why honey has been used as an antiseptic too.
In studies around the world, honey has
turned out to be a great medical aid alternative for superficial wounds due to its antibacterial function that prevents infections. Moreover, it can help with many internal problems too. Due to its powerful antibacterial properties,
it not only soothes the pain but can also kill the bacteria that caused that pain.
Finally, is relevant to mention that not all kinds of honey have the same effect
as others, it may vary depend
ing on the source of the nectar. But,
it sound
s impossible to control all the bees in order to know where the nectar
comes from. That is why honey has to be controlled thoroughly and regularly.
****Your English is really good!!