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myself -please correct me. I want to tell you about myself ..when I was young I lived with my family not rich but we are love and care as well .Everytime I went to the farm with my father ,sometime we caught the fish .we had a lot of cows.Everyday I must to took them to the field,big field .The joke for me once time I hit them because they don't walked just stop and stood so made me angry .I hit them many times so I saw my hit on their back after that I felt sad too much .Im cried too much why I must to hit them .Im a pity after I hit them .This my bad for animals .After I took them to stables I came back to the swimming pool exactly it not swimming pool but look like because it natural pool in the field .I'm good swimmer because I practice by myself sometime can caught the fish ..that time I'm very happy .many times when I thought about my life in the part I feel happy too much .My house located out side the city we didn't had electric to use just had lamp but I like too much.when the storm came again my house look like to destroy by it we run away from house to my sister house which strong more than my house .I felt enjoy too much with my young life.........this all for my teacher ..sorry for my late homework forgive me please..

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About Me

I would like to tell you about myself. When I was young, I lived with my family. They were not rich, but we are loved and cared for each other anyway. Every time I went to out to our farm with my father, we would sometimes go fishing and catch fish. We had a lot of cows, and every day I had to take them out to a big field. One time I had to hit the cows because they wouldn't walk and would just stop and stand around, which made me angry. I hit them many times, on their back and elsewhere so they would get moving. After that, I felt really sad and I started crying. Why did I have to hit them? I felt so much guilt after I hit them! After, I took them back to the stables, I went to a natural swimming pool back in the field. I'm a good swimmer, I practiced by myself and sometimes I can catch fish. Now, I'm very happy. Many times when I think about my life, I think about the parts where I felt the most happiest. My house is located outside the city, so we didn't have any electricity. We only had a lamp, which  I liked a lot. When it became stormy out, my house was destroyed, so we ran away to my sister's house which was much stronger than my house.

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myself -please correct me.

I want to tell you about myself ..when I was young I lived with my family. We were not rich but we loved and cared fir each other. Every time my father went to the farm, I went with him and sometimes we caught fish. we had a lot of cows.Everyday I had to take them to the big field .One time I hit them because they didn't walk, just stopped and stood and it made me angry. I hit them many times and I saw a mark on their back. After that I felt so sad. I cried a lot, wondering why I hit them. I felt pity after I hit them. This was my crime against animals. After I took them to stables, I came back to the swimming pool. It's not exactly a swimming pool but it looks like it because there is a natural pool in the field. I'm a good swimmer because I practice by myself and can sometimes catch fish ..In those times I was very happy. many times when I thought about that part of my life I felt really happy. My house was located outside the city. we didn't have electricity to use, we just had lamps but I liked it a lot. when the storm came again my house was almost destroyed by it. we ran away from our house to my sister's house, which was stronger than my house. I felt a lot of joy in my young life.........this is all for my teacher ..sorry for my late homework forgive me please..


***Some parts I didn't completely understand exactly what you meant, but I did my best. Great job!

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