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My first writting essay Hi, I'm Felipe from Chile and I'm very excited to learn English right now. I hope somebody could help giving me feedback about my writing essay as I will do it to other learners with the intention to improve their Spanish skills. --- It is known that when someone is sick, a cup of hot water with honey would sooth all the bad symptoms, but, what really does honey in your body? I read an article about a list of all advantages of honey and why it is important to dilute it with water to get most of its benefits. The honey's medical reputation stems from its antibacterial feature. Even though is frequent to find bacterias in sweet environments, the honey's properties prevent this proliferation because of its scant amount of water and oxygen, besides this, honey has some acids that prevent the growth of some bacteria. When honey is mixed with water allows some bacteria to flourish, but here is the main and most important fact, only allows the growth of bacteria that are helpful for the human body while killing off dangerous strains. This is why honey has been used as an antiseptic too. In studies around the world, honey has resulted to be a great medical aid alternative for superficial wounds due to its antibacterial function that prevents infections. Moreover, it can help with many internal problems too. Due to its powerful antibacterial properties, not only soothes the pain but also can kill the bacteria that caused that pain. Finally, is relevant to mention that not all kinds of honey have the same effect than others, it may vary depends on the source of the nectar. But sound impossible to control all the bees to know from where proceeds the nectar, that is why honey has to be controlled thoroughly and regularly.

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My first writting essay

Hi, I'm Felipe from Chile and I'm very excited to learn English right now. I hope somebody could help giving me feedback about my writing essay as I will do it to other learners with the intention to improve their Spanish skills.
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It is known that when someone is sick, a cup of hot water with honey would sooth all the bad symptoms, but, what really does honey do in your body? I read an article about a list of all the advantages of honey and why it is important to dilute it with water to get most of its benefits.

The honey's medical reputation stems from its antibacterial feature. Even though is frequent to find bacterias in sweet environments,  honey's properties prevent this proliferation because of its scant amount of water and oxygen, besides this, honey has some acids that prevent the growth of some bacteria. When honey is mixed with water it allows some bacteria to flourish, but here is the main and most important fact,(here should be a colon(:) rather than a comma) it only allows the growth of bacteria that are helpful for the human body while killing off dangerous strains. This is why honey has been used as an antiseptic too.

In studies around the world, honey has resulted been shown to be a great medical aid alternative for superficial wounds due to its antibacterial function that prevents infections. Moreover, it can help with many internal problems too. Due to its powerful antibacterial properties, it not only soothes the pain but also can kill the bacteria that caused that pain.

Finally, is relevant to mention that not all kinds of honey have the same effect than as others, it may vary depends depending on the source of the nectar. But sound it is impossible to control all the bees to know from where proceeds the nectar, and that is why honey has to be controlled thoroughly and regularly.



This is pretty good. If it is your first essay in English then you must have spent a lot of time learning grammar.

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My first writing essay

Hi, I'm Felipe from Chile and I'm very excited to learn English right now. I hope somebody could help by giving me feedback about my writing essay as I will do for other learners with the intention to improve their Spanish skills.
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It's said that when someone is sick, a cup of hot water with honey will sooth all the bad symptoms, but what does honey really do for your body? I read an article about a list of all of the advantages of honey and why it is important to dilute it with water to get most out of its benefits.

Honey's medical reputation stems from its antibacterial feature. Even though it's common to find bacteria in sweet environments, honey's properties prevent this proliferation because of its scant amount of water and oxygen. Besides this, honey also has some acids that prevent the growth of some bacteria. When honey is mixed with water it allows some bacteria to flourish, but here is the main and most important fact: it only allows the growth of bacteria that are helpful for the human body while killing off dangerous strains. This is why honey has been used as an antiseptic too.

In studies around the world, honey has turned out to be a great medical aid alternative for superficial wounds due to its antibacterial function that prevents infections. Moreover, it can help with many internal problems too. Due to its powerful antibacterial properties, it not only soothes the pain but can also kill the bacteria that caused that pain.

Finally, is relevant to mention that not all kinds of honey have the same effect as others, it may vary depending on the source of the nectar. But, it sounds  impossible to control all the bees in order to know where the nectar comes from. That is why honey has to be controlled thoroughly and regularly.

****Your English is really good!!



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yes, a lot! and for the second time in a row!
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are you excited for winning copa

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