IELTS WRITING TASK 1/PRACTICE 6 I would love you guys to correct and grade my essay, I need to get at least 6.5 out of 9 in writing. You can grade me in 4 criteria: task response/ coherence&cohesion/ lexical resources/ grammatical range and accuracy (Cambridge IELTS 8/TEST 4/WRITING TASK 1) The graph presents information about how many goods were transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four means of transport. The figure for goods transported by road remained the highest, increasing from about 70 million tonnes in 1974 to approximately 98 million tonnes in 2002. In contrast, the figure for goods transported by pipeline were the lowest, but it saw the figure climb steadily to around 22 million tonnes in 2002, about 4 times that of in 1974(5 million tonnes). The figure for goods transported by water surpassed the figure for goods transported by rail in 1978, rising to 65 million tonnes in 2002. The figure for goods transported by rail fluctuated, dropping to approximately 28 million tonnes in around 1995, after which it rose to 42 million tonnes in 2002. Overall, it was commoner transport goods by road and water than by rail and pipeline between 1974 and 2002, but there were more and more people who transported goods by pipeline.) The graph presents information about how many goods were transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four means of transport. The figure for goods transported by road remained the highest, increasing from about 70 million tonnes in 1974 to approximately 98 million tonnes in 2002. In contrast, the figure for goods transported by pipeline were the lowest, but it saw the figure climb steadily to around 22 million tonnes in 2002, about 4 times that of in 1974(5 million tonnes). The figure for goods transported by water surpassed the figure for goods transported by rail in 1978, rising to 65 million tonnes in 2002. The figure for goods transported by rail fluctuated, dropping to approximately 28 million tonnes in around 1995, after which it rose to 42 million tonnes in 2002. Overall, it was commoner transport goods by road and water than by rail and pipeline between 1974 and 2002, but there were more and more people who transported goods by pipeline.

IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 5 I would love you guys to correct and grade my essay, I need to get at least 6.5 out of 9 in writing. You can grade me in 4 criteria: task response/ coherence&cohesion/ lexical resources/ grammatical range and accuracy The increase of tourism is causing environmental problems. What problems it causes and what can we do to deal with these problems? MY ANSWER: More and more people like traveling these days, on one hand, this can lead to economic prosperity, but on the other hand, this has some negative impact on the environment. People need to take measures to create a sustainable tourism. When people visit places of interest and some other interesting places during their trip, they need to have meals outside every now and then, and this creates a lot of rubbish. Some people drop litter everywhere, into the lake, on the track and so on. This will not only cause pollution and degrade the environment, but also will harm the wildlife because some animals may eat the rubbish by mistake. The increase of tourism also contributes to global warming. People tend to go traveling by car, by train or by air. Especially when they travel from one place to another in the same city, they always take cabs because they're unfamiliar with the public transportation. Some people will drive their own cars or rent one for traveling. All of these produce greenhouse gas emissions and pollution, which damages the ozone layer and causes climate change. To tackle these problems, the local government should make publicity to raise the awareness of environment issues so people will be aware of the consequences of their actions and a law should be established to punish those who drop litter. Also, the amount of people who visit a popular place should be limited, this will help prevent the damage to the environment. In addition, travelers should be encouraged to take public transportation by setting up special routes for traveling or cutting the cost to reduce the use of cars. Although the increased amount of travelers has harmed the environment, I would argue that as long as people can realize the importance of protecting the environment and take actions, we can achieve a sustainable tourism.

IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 4 I'm writing these 3 introduction paragraphs, I would love it if you help correct them : ) ①International travel often leads people to have some prejudices rather than make them broad-minded. What are the main reasons for this phenomenon? What do you think people can do to get a better understanding of the countries they visit? MY ANSWER: People travel abroad because they want to know more about other countries, but because of the differences between different cultures, they are, however, more likely to have wrong impressions about the countries they travel in. There are several reasons about why this is happening, and some preparations I think people should make before traveling abroad. ②The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? MY ANSWER: Farmers tend to move to cities for job-seeking because they can get a higher salary in cities and improve their living standards. However, this can lead to some problems to both agricultural areas and cities. People need to take steps to tackle these problems. ③Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? MY ANSWER: There are people who believe university education makes no contribution to the society, it is only beneficial to the students. Because of this, some people think university students should cover the whole cost of studying in universities on their own. However, I hardly agree with this.

IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 3 Some people think that working with a high salary is more important, but others think that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. MY ANSWER: Money is a main motivation for people to work hard, but the working environment can stimulate individuals to act better, too. People have been arguing about which one is more important between the two. If I were to say, a good working environment is more essential for me. A high salary means a better life. People who earn a lot of money usually have higher living standards. They can enjoy their lives by going to good reataurants and buying luxury goods and so on, which will also give them s sense of achievement about their jobs. People who have good performance at work are likely to expect a high salary for they take it as a proof of their accomplishment. In the meanwhile, working in a good environment also motivates people. A good working environment means there are good working facilities and good collegues whom people can learn from, which will help make progress at work and make it more possible for people to be satisfied with their jobs. People tend to be in a good mood when they are working in an environment like this, so they will be more willingful to work harder.All these advantages a good working environment has can lead to individuals’ promotions becanuse they stimulate people in many ways. From my perspective, a good working environment does people more good than a high salary, because it makes people work in pleasant surroundings and can lead to a rise. There are demanding jobs that give people a lot of money for doing hard work, mostly physically, but the working environment can be poor. In constrast, a agood working environment provides peoplewith more opportunities to improve themselves on a spirit-lifting basis, which indirectly motivates people to earn more money in an easier way. PS: I would love you guys to correct and grade my essay, I need to get at least 6.5 out of 9 in writing. You can grade me in 4 criteria: task response/ coherence&cohesion/ lexical resources/ grammatical range and accuracy

IELTS WRITING TASK 2/Practice 2-1 People who work from home with computers tend to keep in touch with their friends online. Although this has brought people convenience, it can also lead to a lack of face-to-face communication. Computers have made it unnecessary for individuals to attend meetings in the office, but they've also made people barely socialize with each other. In addition, people who are tied to a computer may lead a inactive life. They can be addicted to computer games instead of playing sports. Even worse, not maintaining physical activities will cause illness. Computers are beneficial to us by being a useful tool, but only when people use computers in a proper way have they made our world a better place.

IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 2 Some people believe that computers have made our world a better place. To what extent do you agree or disagree? My answer: More and more people use computers now, no matter in schools or at work. From my perspective, computer usage has allowed people to live in a more efficient and harmonious way. Using computers saves people's time and makes it possible for people to get to know about foreign cultures. Computers have made people all over the world feel closer to each other. Reading news on the Internet let people know what is happening in the world and get to know other countries. There are websites where people can talk about a wide range of things like politics, sports and science with people from different countries. In the past, when we don't have computers, people in China had no idea about Americans because they couldn't talk to any American. With computers, even Chinese still live far from the U.S.A, they can make friends with American people online and communicate with them. Also, people can do many things in an easier way with computers. If a person wants to learn a language or a skill, he doesn't need to go to a school or attend classes because there're many courses offered online so people can study anything they want without stepping out. Students can solve problems they have by talking to people who are on the same subject with computers. Communications between scholars can help to develop new technologies. In fact, experts from different countries working together is not rare with computers. However, computers have bad influences on people, too. Children can be addicted to computer games then lose their interests in studying. Even worse, there are criminals selling illegal things like drugs and weapons by computers, and they're sometimes untraceable. I believe the computer has brought us more benefits, for it has given people chances to do what they couldn't do in the past. People can communicate with others easily and work more efficiently with their computers, which does make our world a better place. PS: I would love you guys to correct and grade my essay, I need to get at least 6.5 out of 9 in writing. You can grade me in 4 criteria: task response/ coherence&cohesion/ lexical resources/ grammatical range and accuracy

IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 1-2 Still this topic: In many countries, children spend long hours on homework. Some people think less homework can reduce their stress and help develop other skills. What is your opinion? I just need you to correct this paragraph I've written: However, too less homework may also leave children plenty of time to play computer games and watch TV. A lack of practicing, such as reading books and doing drills, can make it difficult for children to improve literacy skills and numeracy skills. As a result of it, children will have poor grades, and their career prospects will not be as good as they expect.