IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 4 I'm writing these 3 introduction paragraphs, I would love it if you help correct them : ) ①International travel often leads people to have some prejudices rather than make them broad-minded. What are the main reasons for this phenomenon? What do you think people can do to get a better understanding of the countries they visit? MY ANSWER: People travel abroad because they want to know more about other countries, but because of the differences between different cultures, they are, however, more likely to have wrong impressions about the countries they travel in. There are several reasons about why this is happening, and some preparations I think people should make before traveling abroad. ②The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? MY ANSWER: Farmers tend to move to cities for job-seeking because they can get a higher salary in cities and improve their living standards. However, this can lead to some problems to both agricultural areas and cities. People need to take steps to tackle these problems. ③Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? MY ANSWER: There are people who believe university education makes no contribution to the society, it is only beneficial to the students. Because of this, some people think university students should cover the whole cost of studying in universities on their own. However, I hardly agree with this.