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IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 1-2 Still this topic: In many countries, children spend long hours on homework. Some people think less homework can reduce their stress and help develop other skills. What is your opinion? I just need you to correct this paragraph I've written: However, too less homework may also leave children plenty of time to play computer games and watch TV. A lack of practicing, such as reading books and doing drills, can make it difficult for children to improve literacy skills and numeracy skills. As a result of it, children will have poor grades, and their career prospects will not be as good as they expect.

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2/PRACTICE 1-2

Still this topic: In many countries, children spend long hours on homework. Some people think less homework can reduce their stress and help develop other skills. What is your opinion?

I just need you to correct this paragraph I've written:
However, less homework may also leave children plenty of time to play computer games and watch TV. A lack of practicing, such as reading books and doing drills, can make it difficult for children to improve literacy skills and numeracy skills. As a result of this, children will have poor grades, and their career prospects will not be as good as they expected. 

Great job! :) 

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