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    Great job overall!! Just a few corrections! :)

    Sightseeing spot in Nagoya (Yokiso villa Choshokaku building.)

    Today, I wrote about Choshokaku, the building I work for as a guide. You can see the images of Choshokaku in on the website.

    http://yokiso.jp/eng/guide02/

    Main attractions of Choshokaku:

    Choshokaku is the landmark of Yokoso Villa.
    It was built in 1937 and was used as a guest house.
    It is 3 a three-story storied building with a basement.

    This house has different styles in on each floor.
    The first floor and the second floor are have a Western-inspired style.
    The third floor is designed in a has a Japanese-inspired style.
    Probably the The most unique features can be are found in the basement, which is designed in has an Indian-inspired style.

    The first draft of the interior was in all completely Western-styled, but Suketami, the owner, had changed the planning draft after his trip to Southeast Asian countries and India in 1934.
    Being a Buddhist, Suketami Ito, the owner of the house, had been impressed by the cave paintings in Ajanta, India. In the basement, you can see Indian-style wall paintings by an Indian artist, as well as and Indian-inspired decorations in the hall. The paintings depict the scenes from Buddha’s birth; and they were copied after the cave paintings of the Ajanta stone cave. There used to be a long tunnel that linked Choshokaku and Yuhouken, another Japanese tea house. The purpose of this tunnel is remaining remains uncertain. You can see the entrance of this mysterious tunnel in the basement too.

    Imagine the The house is was built about 70 seventy years ago, and at that time, there were neither no guidebooks nor the and no Internet. People did not have many opportunities to hear about other nations. So Suketami, the owner, proudly talked about what he saw in his trip to his guests by showcasing the different each rooms in Choshokaku.
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    Hey! Really great job overall! I just added/changed some things in yellow and crossed out some words that could be deleted. Hope this helps! :)

    Could you please correct this? :)

        Help! I Am Trapped in a Vampire’s Body, (italicize book titles) marginally published in the year 2000, is a vampire story, novel written by Todd Strasser. The story tells is about a boy, whose named is Jake Sherman who switches bodies with a vampire. He is a mischievous boy who has two good friends; their names are Andy and Josh. They are amusing boys whose and they help Jake to return in to his real body. The story shows us illustrates how preteens can fix a mess dilemma. 
        The events portrayed in the novel take place chronologically in Jake’s house and his school. The story begins when Jake’s parents go to Chicago so and he decides to throw a Halloween party. The party is a big should be a major secret so that Thus, that way no one will crash it and there’ll there will be no trouble. After preparing for the party, preparation he Jake and his friends go to their school  there where there is was a machine called, “The DITS” (Dirksen Intelligence Transfer System). A teacher had invented this machine to help students learn without a teacher having needing to teach. But However, the machine had never worked correctly. Instead, it usually made would  switch people's bodies. This machine makes to caused Jake to switch bodies with a vampire, whose name is Vlad, the school custodian. Consequently, Jake goes dress up to the attends the Halloween party dressed as vampire.

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    Something you can’t resist

    I've I have always had a soft spot for chocolate. I really love it, but I know It is not a very good thing for me. It isn't useful beneficial for improving a person's health. I am not fat, however, there are lots of many people who suffer from obesity. They need to do some exercises Those who suffer from obesity should exercise everyday and eat fed very carefully. In addition, running for at least If anyone runs for ten minutes everyday would greatly improve their overall health.
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    Hey! I made some corrections: the yellow means I added or changed the words, and the crossed-out words would need to be deleted. Hope this helps :)


    Letter to my love (2)

    Dear future husband,

    My uncle passed away last week, so I went back to my hometown for the funeral. I feel very sorry for my cousin, she lost her mother a few years ago and now she has lost her father, too. She is not married, so she is totally alone now. I am very worry worried about her, so I invited her to move to my city to live with me. I told her my salary may is not much, but enough for both of us living to live off of. I can take care of her. If she can't quit the her job, maybe she can at least even come for a holiday is good. But However, she doesn't like the city I live in, so she is not coming, but later she said we can travel to Thailand together after June.

    My dear, after this funeral, I feel life is so fragile sometimes, you never know what is going to gonna happen next. We should take care of our loves loved ones and spend time with them as much as we can. My dear, I really wish we can could meet soon and be together. I am also very scared of my parents getting old and when the final day comes, I wish hope that time you are with me, to hug me and give me courage.

    My love, wherever you are at right now, take good care of yourself for me and find me soon.

    Love you xoxoxo
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    Hi! Overall, you did a great job writing this. However, here are some of my corrections below. The yellow signifies words that I changed or added in. The crossed-out words need to be deleted. Hope this helps :)

    THREE METERS ABOVE THE SKY

    The film is based on the book by Federico Moccia. The film was directed by Fernando González, and starts stars Mario Casas and María Valverde. The film won three awards, tho two of the awards were for best actor and the other was for best film.

    The film is set in Barcelona in the year of 2010. It was filmed on location in Madrid and in Barcelona.

    The film is about the love history of the lead actors characters, called Hugo and Babi. Hugo is a very aggressive boy, his presence incites rejection from others; he has been fighting so for survival all his life. On the contrary, the family's Babi comes from a rich family, she is very innocent and she always obeys her parents does that their parents said her.

    They Hugo and Babi first meet when Hugo and his friend go into house of Babi's house to steal. However, Hugo and Babi fell fall in love when they first see each other. from the first moment they were together. Love at fist sight!

    At the beginning of the relationship, everything were  is easy, but when Babi's parents find out about the relationship, of her they dissaprove aren't in agreement because Hugo isn't who they will expect. They Babi's parents try to break up to the relationship.

    I strongly recommended Three Meters Above the Sky. It has action, drama, an unforgettable soundtrack, and it contains an important message: that violence never really solves anything. The sequel I desire you is also good, but the first film is definitely my favorite.
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    Hey! First off, you did a great job writing this post! I went ahead and corrected some things for you though. The yellow highlight represents sentences and words that I re-worked and added in for you. The crossed-out words would need to be deleted. I hope this is helpful!


    Post of part-time job

    Dear Sir or Madam, (add comma)
    Post of part-time gardener
    I am contacting you because I am interested in applying for the part-time gardener position which that I saw posted on the Internet. Last summer, I worked as a gardener at a local greenhouse where my responsibilities included growing fruits and vegetables. I consider myself to be hard-working, clever, and patient. My passion for gardening was influenced by my mother, who has big garden of her own, where I help her grow vegetables. I would be grateful for the opportunity to visit your greenhouse to show you my skills discuss my experience and the details of the job. If my application is successful. I am available for work beginning on June 2nd of this year.
    I look hearing from you. I look forward to hearing from you.



    Sincerely,

    Gordey

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    With your second sentence, "There is no greater pain than loosing a child", you should replace "loosing" with "losing"... that is the correct spelling of the word that you are trying to use. Other than that, everything else looks good! :)
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