Something you can’t resist
I've always had a soft spot for chocolate. I really love it but I know It is not a good thing. It isn't usefull for our health. I am not fat but there are lots of people who suffer from obesity. They need to do some exercises everyday and fed very carefully. If anyone runs for ten minutes everyday i think it is enough to be healthy.
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Something you can’t resist
I've always had a soft spot for chocolate. I really love it but I know it is not a good thing. It isn't usefull for our health. (Here, I recommend you say "It isn't healthy".) I am not fat but there are lots of people who suffer from obesity. They need to do some exercises exercise everyday and fed eat very carefully. If anyone runs for ten minutes everyday I think it is enough to be healthy.Overall, very clear and well-written :)
Everything is grammatically correct, I just changed words to be more consistent with how people talk every day.
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Something you can’t resist
I've I have always had a soft spot for chocolate. I really love it, but I know It is not a very good thing for me. It isn't useful beneficial for improving a person's health. I am not fat, however, there are lots of many people who suffer from obesity. They need to do some exercises Those who suffer from obesity should exercise everyday and eat fed very carefully. In addition, running for at least If anyone runs for ten minutes everyday would greatly improve their overall health.Want to progress faster?
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