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Need help with English i can help you with German
I need someone who can help me correct my grammar mistakes. Because i need to write four small texts for an application for a canadian summer camp.
Swimming. <font style="background-color: yellow;">I have been swimming for thirteen years</font>. I swim three times a week and <font style="background-color: yellow;">when there is a </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font>competition. Two times a week I train children between t<font style="background-color: yellow;">he age of four and fourteen</font>. I<font style="background-color: yellow;"> attended a </font>few seminars to improve my teaching skills.
Drama. I have been doing theatre for six years. I was involved in different performances. We always<font style="background-color: yellow;"> had a final perform</font>ance in a big theatre
Camping. Last summer I went on a seven day trekking trip through sweden. I made some smaller trips before and after it.
I have a lot of experience teaching swimming to children. I went to a few seminars to improve my teaching skills for children.I have also experience in <font style="background-color: yellow;">organizing</font> different activities for example<font style="background-color: yellow;"> Sports Nights and </font>Christmas activities for children.
i would be very happy if anybody can help me with this :D0 votedMarch 19, 20180Practice writing 1
Hello. I'm Yuu. I live in Japan and I am Japanese. I love to travel. Recently I went to Los Angeles. It was my first time visiting America!! It was an amazing experience. There were many nice people, many beautiful places and much delicious food... and Disney land xD I was so happy when I was there.
I knew in America everything was bigger but it was even bigger than I thought! o
Especially food. I do like eating but sometimes I couldn't eat all the food! TT
I really wanted to eat it all because it was delicious TT but it was too much for me ... haha
America was huge ... I want to see many more places in America !
And try to speak English more too. I couldn't say much English this time ... ahh I should have used English more:p
Thanks for taking your time to read this.
Thank you :)Hi, I'd love to go to America! - I've made some changes to help with the flow and make it easier to read! Let me know if you have any questions. Douglas
0 votedFebruary 22, 20171- That sentence can mean playing while it was snowing and also when the snow has stopped falling. 'Playing in the snow' suggests the general idea of playing in the snow 'Playing with the snow' suggests holding snow in your hands, building a snowman, making snowballs etc Hope this helps!0 votedFebruary 16, 20170
A big meteorite
Hello everybody! More than 1 year ago, a big meteorite exploded in the sky of our city. Each citizen of our city remembers what they were doing at that moment. As for me, I was at my office working and saw a big flash outside the window. Then I ran to the street because I had no idea what was happening.0 votedFebruary 16, 20170Sentences - "(the) penny drops / dropped" and "play for time"
At the beginning my mother didn't understand but in the end the penny dropped.
He knew he had to play for time until the police arrived.
Can someone give me more examples, please? Thank you.I found playing golf difficult but then the penny dropped. It became easier!
I had to play for time when I was waiting for the train!
0 votedFebruary 13, 20170Mon premier article en français
Je me lève à six heures et demie chaque matin parce que j'enseigne une classe à sept heures. D'habitude j'écoute un podcast au lit pendant quinze minutes pour me réveiller et ensuite je m'habillée rapidement et me brosse les dents. Je me pèse et boite de l'eau. Après ma classe je fais un peu de méditation et puis je prépare mon petit-déjeuner. J'ai des épinards et des oignons tous les jours, et généralement j'ai aussi des fruits secs, des pois chiches et quelquefois des noix. Je mange aussi toujours de poisson ou des œufs.je m'habille et je me brosse les dents
et je bois de l'eau
du poisson
0 votedFebruary 13, 20170Hamburg
It's bitterly cold in Hamburg these days. I go outside and look for some firewood that our former neighbor left us as a farewell present. Now I´m sitting in front of the fireplace. I pour myself a glass of wine and think of our lovely Brazilian neighbors, who unfortunately had to move back to Rio after Christmas. I miss the laughter and happiness they brought to our house.
The other day my father told me that a friend of his went to Hamburg by train and the friend was confused that he barely heard German on the train. He most likely meant that there are too many foreigners in the city now.
We city-dwellers are maybe more used to people from other countries and it might be a surprise for people from the countryside watching and listening to all the different voices. But I think the more or less hidden refusal from these people against immigration is wrong. (rethink this sentence) but here is a suggestion : But I think people that refuse to accept immigrants are wrong.
Apart from the very few who think evil and carry hate in their hearts I wanna consider register wanna - informal/spoken or want to - more formal/written welcome all students and people from all over the world trying to learn German. You are an enrichment to my country !
While I´m drinking wine by the fireplace I send a selfie of myself sitting there by whatsapp to my neighbors in Rio and thank them for the firewood. You need to know that in Rio the temperatures are very high these days. My friends answer me by saying they will turn the aircon down and share a glass of wine with me.Advice :
Watch use of tenses - eg I am sitting in front of a fireplace (is present continuous) - it's happening RIGHT now/recently, and I am pouring myself a glass of wine.
Keep it consistent!
0 votedFebruary 13, 20171
