Practice writing 1 Hello. I'm Yuu. Live in Japan and Japanese. I love to travel. Recently I went to Los Angeles. It was my first time to visit to America!! It was a very great experience. Many nice pe

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Practice writing 1 Hello. I'm Yuu. Live in Japan and Japanese. I love to travel. Recently I went to Los Angeles. It was my first time to visit to America!! It was a very great experience. Many nice people, many beautiful places,many delicious food... and Disney land xD I was so touched when I was there. I knew in America every things are bigger but it was really! bigger ! :o Especially food. I do like eating but I couldn't eat all some times TT I really wanted to eat all because they were delicious TT but too big to me ... haha America was huge ... I want to see many places in America more ! And try to speak English more too. I couldn't say English that much in this time ... ahh I should have used English more:p Thanks for taking your time to read this. Thank you :)

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Practice writing 1

Hello. I'm Yuu. I live in Japan and I'm Japanese. I love to traveling. Recently I went to Los Angeles. It was my first time to visit to America!! It was a very great experience. There were many nice people, many beautiful places, many delicious food... and Disney land xD I was so touched when I was there.

I knew in America every things are bigger but it was really! bigger ! :o Everything in America was much bigger than I imagined.
Especially food. I do like eating but I couldn't eat all some times TT Especially the food, I do like eating but I couldn't always finish everything.
I really wanted to eat all because they were delicious TT but too big to me ... haha I really wanted to finish all my meals because they were so delicious but the portions were just too big.

America was huge ... I want to see many places in America more ! America is huge, there are so many other places in America that I would love to see.
And try to speak English more too. I couldn't say English that much in this time ... ahh I should have used English more:p And I should try to speak English more frequently. I couldn't say much in English this time. I should have tried harder to speak English.

Thanks for taking your time to read this.
Thank you :)

Practice writing 1

Hello. I'm Yuu. I live in Japan and I am Japanese. I love to travel. Recently I went to Los Angeles. It was my first time visiting America!! It was an amazing experience. There were many nice people, many beautiful places and much delicious food... and Disney land xD I was so happy when I was there.

I knew in America everything was bigger but it was even bigger than I thought! o
Especially food. I do like eating but sometimes I couldn't eat all the food! TT
I really wanted to eat it all because it was delicious TT but it was too much for me ... haha

America was huge ... I want to see many more places in America !
And try to speak English more too. I couldn't say much English this time ... ahh I should have used English more:p

Thanks for taking your time to read this.
Thank you :)

Hi, I'd love to go to America! - I've made some changes to help with the flow and make it easier to read! Let me know if you have any questions. Douglas

If you had spoken English very well when you visited America, your trip could have been more fun.

☺☺ nice

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