9.12.2017

A few days ago my girlfriend and I went out to watch a movie. I thought we will would be late because the movie was about to start, but we were 10 minutes away from the movie theater. This time We didn't take neither snacks nor or beer. That's good.
Surprisingly, the movie theater was almost empty. onIt is It's probably because most people prefer not going out a don't go to the movies on Sunday evening.
We hurried up, and was were right in on time. However, we should waited on a long advertisement on the screen before the movie starteds.

story #1 "About me and my land"

Hello! I'm Zhenya. I am studying, English and I want to tell you story about my life.
I live in the South Western Siberia, in the city of Novokuznetsk. Siberia is a big, rich and beautiful land. I often hear rumors that in Siberia bears walking walk along the streets in of the city. It is true. Bears can jump into the tram and ride all day.They can search for food in garbage cans or take away your package with products (do you mean продукты?  "Groceries" we would say in the US) . In the summer and autumn they are very kind and funny, but in the spring bears are hungry and angry. Once they were masters of the taiga, and they did not let us out of the entrance. (Im not sure what you mean --  a entrance of the forest? )My brother and I did not go to school for a whole week.
Have believed me? This is a joke! Actually, bears live in a the forest. My city is surrounded by taiga. Except Besides bears other animals live in the taiga.   Wolves, foxes, deer (deer is always spelled and said deer - an exception moose is also aways spelled moose)moose , lynxes, martens e.t.c. They are very afraid to go out into the city.
Here is a story about my land. Maybe I am a little carried away by the description of the bears but I'm an economist and not a writer, thank you very much.

Check it please

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writting writing to complain about your restaurant "La Monte", which I visited last Friday. I wasn't pleased with the service, the prices and or quality of the food.
FirstlyFirst, the waiters was were very slow. We had to wait too long. Moreover, the pasta was badly cooked. Why? Because it is was too spicy. Secondly, the pizza was cold. It is  was (simple past) awful! You must correct your mistakes.
Also I was surprised when I got the bill. It was too expensive. You must understand that such money didn't cost your work. (Confusing sentence -- I think you mean " The food and service did not merit your work) .
I trust that you will give the matter serious consideration and that this won't be repeated.

Yours faithfully, Marya.

I like to learn English.

I like to learning English. I use this site to learn more and improve my English. Now I'm at the level of elementary level. If you like books, movies, board games and cats we can chat a little.

My life. Beginning.

Good day every one.(Hello Everyone  {Sounds more natural - to an American}
I am Svetlana. I am 30 years old. I was born in Kazakhstan in Ust-Kamenogorsk. My Whole entire my childhood I spent in this town.(My entire childhood was spent in this town - sounds better)  I was interested in dancing, so my mum took me in to a dance team, and in at the age of seven I began to dance and had an excellent success. A year later I desided decided to enter in a music school and began to study  fortepiano piano.. But after three years I left a music makingl, and spent more time at school and in a dance team. I changed the school to have more a stronger education- that was why studying began take a lot of time. A few years later my program at school changed and I needed to pass exams on qualification in humanitarian or mathematics skills and then continued studying in a special class. It was thrilling, but I successfully did whole tasks and entered the mathematical class.After I graduated from the school, I went to Russia to get a begin a profession in Tomsk Polytechnic University.

This It  was written on Saturday at twenty hours and fifty four minutes in the afternoon.

I'd{I'd = I would(.- wrong vocabulary - you want to say: I would like to try, I will, or I am going to try : } I will try to describe what I see in this at this {at this and in this = prepositional verbs; memorize - it is easier} moment around me. I'm clicking on the buttons on my gray keyboard to describe this. I'm sitting on in  (think of this as Russian в vs. на you are "in your room" not "on your room") my room; which is not large. It is about sixteen square meters. There is a large, and wide bed with a so magnificent matress that allows me to have a full and healthy sleep every night. There are a two wooden, chairs brownbrown chairs, the a tall bookcase with shelves, one wardrobe for clothes and my work table.
I woke up recently and did{woke is past tense - so "did" and "made" -- should also be) had not make made one's my bed yet. I'd like to change my bed linen today. I think I need to do a big cleaning in my room today, because yesterday I saw a layer of the{"layer of dust" = collective noun; you already used the article "a" } dust on the shelf of my bookcase and understood that I have not made a {in English you simply "clean"  not "make a clean" also."} cleaned in{Irritating prepsitional verb - memorize} ing a long time. I think I should vacuum, mop of up the floor and wipe the dust. Today I have enough time to make do all of this.
I think if I will try to practice formulate my thoughts about life and simple things on in  this notebook.  It would help me to more efficiently learn the language.

Great job!, Difficult to write.  It might help you to look up prepositions and prepositional verbs/phrasal verbs.  They are the only thing you are having any real troubles with -- but most of the time you used the correctly.