Magic in the city

Hello boys and girls!

I'm watching "The Charmed" and you know when I was in  (at??) middle school, girls from my class thought they are were witches :D To tell you the truth, I was in "The magic club" too, hehe. We had imagined the potions and spells to tried try to change our grades with a magic. It was very fun! Nevertheless we are grown up and "The Charmed" is a nice memory of childhood.

Fully rewritten:

Hello boys and girls!

I'm watching Charmed and, you know, when I was in middle school, girls from my class thought they were witches. :D To tell you the truth, I was in the magic club too, hehe. We imagined potions and spells to try to change our grades with magic. It was very fun! Nevertheless, we are grown up (now) and Charmed is a nice memory of childhood.

1. TV Shows and movies are usually italicized in English instead of put in "quotes" (at least in the US).

2. I changed "potions and spells tried to change" into "potions and spells to try to change" because "to try" implies cause and effect, which is what you were going for, I think.

3. In the last sentence, "we are grow up" was changed to "we are grown up" because the verb "to grow" changes spelling to "grown" if you are using it as a past tense participle.

For example: We grow. (<--This is in present tense.) We grew. (<--This is in simple past tense.) We are grown. / We have grown. (Both of these sentences use "grow" as a past participle, and when grow is used in this way, it changes spelling to "grown".) Some more English verbs do a weird spelling change when they get turned into past participles:

Infinitive form: to fly;     Simple past: flew;     Past Participle: flown;

Infinitive form: to eat;    Simple past: ate;     Past Participle: eaten;

Well done! Keep practicing :)

Magic in the city

Hello boys and girls!

I'm watching "The Charmed" and you know in (at??) {in middle school -- English prepositions are confusing :D} middle school girls from my class thought they are were witches :D To tell the truth I was in "The magic club" too, hehe. We had imagined the potions and spells, and tried to change our grades with a magic. It was very fun! Nevertheless we are grow grew up and "The Charmed" is a nice memory of childhood.

Magic in the city

Hello boys and girls!

I'm watching "The Charmed" and you know in middle school, girls from my class thought they were witches :D To tell you the truth, I was in "The Magic Club" too, hehe. We imagined potions and spells, and tried to change our grades with magic. It was very fun! Nevertheless we are grown up now, and "The Charmed" is a nice childhood memory.