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9.12.2017 A few days ago my girlfriend and I went out to watch a movie. I thought we will be late because the movie was about to start, but we were 10 minutes away from the movie theater. This time we didn't take neither snacks nor beer. That's good. Surprisingly, the movie theater was almost empty. It is probably because most people prefer not going out a movie Sunday evening. We hurried up and was right in time. However, we should wait a long advertisement on the screen before the movie starts.

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9.12.2017

A few days ago my girlfriend and I went out to watch a movie. I thought we will  would be late because the movie was about to start, but we were 10 minutes away from the movie theater. This time we didn't take took neither snacks nor beer. That's good.
Surprisingly, the movie theater was almost empty. It is probably because most people prefer not going out to a movie on Sunday evening.
We hurried up and was were right in on time. However, we should had to wait for a long advertisement on the screen before the movie starts started.


Comments: You can say "we did not take either snacks or beer" or "we took neither snacks nor beer". 

Very good job!

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9.12.2017

A few days ago my girlfriend and I went out to watch a movie. I thought we will be late because the movie was about to start, but we were 10 minutes away from the movie theater. This time we didn't take neither snacks nor beer. That's good.
Surprisingly, the movie theater was almost empty. It is probably because most people prefer not going out a movie Sunday evening.
We hurried up and was right in time. However, we should wait a long advertisement on the screen before the movie starts.

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A few days ago my girlfriend and I went out to watch a movie. I thought we WOULD be late because the movie was about to start AND we were 10 minutes away from the [DELETE "MOVIE" BECAUSE IT'S CLEAR THAT IT IS A "MOVIE" THEATER] theater. This time we didn't take EITHER snacks or beer. That's good. 

Surprisingly, the movie theater was almost empty. IT'S [THE CONTRACTION IS MORE COMMON] probably because most people prefer NOT TO GO TO THE MOVIES ON SUNDAY EVENINGS. We hurried [DELETE "UP"] and WERE right on time. However, we HAD TO SIT THROUGH a long advertisement on the screen before the movie STARTED.

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Thank you for the comment and corrections. I'll write about the movie in the next note. )
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This is clear and easy to understand. My corrections are in yellow. You made few mistakes. Keep up the good work. You never said what the movie was. :)
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9.12.2017

A few days ago my girlfriend and I went out to watch a movie. I thought we will would be late because the movie was about to start, but we were 10 minutes away from the movie theater. This time We didn't take neither snacks nor or beer. That's good.
Surprisingly, the movie theater was almost empty. onIt is It's probably because most people prefer not going out a don't go to the movies on Sunday evening.
We hurried up, and was were right in on time. However, we should waited on a long advertisement on the screen before the movie starteds.

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