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    Dear Carolyn,<o:p></o:p>

    Hope you are doing <s>great</s> well. Thank you so much for agreeing to look after my house and <s>my</s> cat Isolda. I will be traveling around Russia <s>all my holidays</s> for my entire holiday. During this time I can be reached <s>Feel free to give me a</s> <s>ring</s> on my mobile phone, for any reason. <s>if you need anything or for some  urgent matters</s> <s>or write on e-mail</s> I can also be reached via email at <s>(</s><a href="mailto:[email protected]">[email protected]</a><s>)</s> if you cannot get ahold of me on my mobile.<o:p></o:p>

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    My cat <s>may be</s> maybe frightened of new <s>person</s> people in my house, so <s>side </s>she<s> can</s> might hide away from you for a couple of days. <s>but</s> In general, she is a friendly <s>one</s> cat. I should <s>say</s> also mention that she likes to catch mice and could possibly bring <s>this animal</s> a mouse in <s>from street</s> to <s>my</s> the house. <s>but it is in a cats nature</s>.(Unnecessary information)  I have already prepared the necessary foods for <s>my cat</s> Isolda. You will find it inside the fridge.<o:p></o:p>

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    You are always welcome to use the fridge, foods, TV and other facilities I have at my home. <s>but</s> However, I ask that you don’t have any parties at my house because an older neighbor lady next door that is known to call the police due to noise after 23:00. <s>one old lady lives next door and she might call the police in case of noise after 23:00.<o:p></o:p></s>

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    Thank you.<o:p></o:p>

    Yours sincerely, <o:p></o:p>

    Marina<o:p></o:p>

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    <s>Than</s> Then we walked down a long <s>the</s> street<s>, in was a long walk</s>, but we were going slowly and stop whenever I got tired. <s>(my parents thought that is a trifle).</s> When I went to school it was noisy, but I was not frightened. There were a lot of teenagers (my grandmother’s pupils) who greeted me warmly and smiled at me all the time. Then after an <s>Next</s> hour they were playing games. I thought about how <s>wonder that </s>all the people were very friendly and supportive to each other. I was curious and <s>about what was going on that is why I was</s> <s>keeping</s> kept asking my grandmother <s>nearly </s> about everything. <s>and</s> She <s>was</s> would answer<s>ing,</s> and I could<s>n’t</s> not remember a time <s>her saying</s>  She would tell me to “ shut up” or “leave me <s>along</s> alone”. Later, <s>Then</s> we ate too much sweets, <s>and</s> cookies and drank delicious tea. Finally, my grandfather picked us up at school by car to go home. <s>came to school by car and took us home.<o:p></o:p></s>

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    <s>In conclusion</s> We can conclude <s>say</s> that <s>the most</s> it is very important <s>thing is</s> for family members to be warm and kind <s>attitudes of family members</s> to each other. In this case the child will grow up to be <s>as</s> a good person.

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    Childhood memories are special for everyone and I have happy and sad memories from my childhood. I <s>think</s> believe childhood experience always has a way of effecting <s>affects</s> <s>on</s> our future life.<o:p></o:p>

    I remember myself <s>from</s> at four years old.  <s>and</s> My early childhood was strongly connected to <s>with</s> my grandparents, especially my grandmother. We were always together like closest friends. I would like to <s>tell </s> say that she was my first and best teacher. I am grateful to her for spending time with me and I always <s>was </s>trusted her.<o:p></o:p>

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    <s>When</s> I was thinking about one specific memory, the first one that came to my mind was visiting her work (she worked as a math teacher). It was New Year Eve and<s> I’ve</s> I had recently turned four years old. It was a long way to the school so we had to take a bus (confusing sentence) <s>First was a long way to school and we took a bus. </s>My grandmother allowed <s>alloyed</s> me to buy <s>bought</s> two tickets for the bus.  This made <s>to make</s> me feel like a grown-up. When I <s>was</s> talked<s>ing </s>to grandmother I felt like respected adult <s>respectable person</s> because she had endless patience.<s>:</s> She always listened to me and explained <s>me</s> reasons of our behavior. <s>and</s> <s>let</s> She allowed me try to do different <s>thinks</s> things according to my abilities. <o:p></o:p>

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    How to gain students. Hello everyone! I am new to italki as well as a community tutor. I am wondering what would be a good way to gain more students to use me as a tutor. I receive a great deal of people just wanting to be language partners, which is not what I want. I would love any feedback that you have to offer. Thank you.
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    Trip to Northeast of Brazil

    Hi everybody!
    I  want to tell you about a trip I took a few years ago. I live in Brazil and there were some cities I wanted to visit. I went to Alagoas, João Pessoa and Aracaju. I loved the trip and enjoyed many cities in the northeast of my country.
    All of those cities were amazing, pretty beaches, people and soul. I have no word to describe the beauty and diversity of my country.
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    July 15, 2016
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