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Trip to Northeast of Brazil Hi everybody! I'm going to tell you things about a trip I took a few years ago. I live in Brazil and there were some cities I wanted to visit. I went to Alagoas, João Pessoa and Aracaju. I loved this trip and enjoyed the northeast of my country. All of those cities are amazing: pretty beaches, friendly people and great souls. I have no word to describe how beautiful and diversie my country is.

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Trip to Northeast of Brazil

Hi everybody!
I  want to tell you about a trip I took a few years ago. I live in Brazil and there were some cities I wanted to visit. I went to Alagoas, João Pessoa and Aracaju. I loved the trip and enjoyed many cities in the northeast of my country.
All of those cities were amazing, pretty beaches, people and soul. I have no word to describe the beauty and diversity of my country.
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Trip to Northeast of Brazil

Hi everybody!
I going to tell you things about a trip of I took some years ago. I live in Brazil and there are some cities I wanted to visit. I went to Alagoas, João Pessoa and Aracaju. I loved this trip and enjoyed a lot the northeast of my country a lot.
All of those cities are amazing: pretty beaches, people and souls. I have no words to describe how beautiful and diversity diverse my country is is my country.
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Trip to Northeast of Brazil

Hi everybody!
I am going to tell you things about a trip I took of a few some years ago. I live in Brazil and there were some cities I wanted to visit. I went to Alagoas, João Pessoa, and Aracaju. I loved this trip and enjoyed a lot the northeast of my country.
All of those cities are amazing. They have pretty beaches, people*, and soul. I have no words to describe how beautiful and diverse is my country is.


"enjoyed a lot" -- "a lot" has to come after what you enjoyed, like: "enjoyed the northeast of my country a lot." You could also use the word "really" before: "really enjoyed the northeast of my country."

people* -- Perhaps you want to say, "great people"? Right now this sentence says they have people, but every city has people. So you should put an adjective (like "great" or "friendly") before "people."

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