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Letter This is a task: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties This is an answer: Dear Carolyn, Hope you are doing great. Thank you so much for agreeing to look after my house and my cat Isolda. I will be traveling around Russia all my holidays. Feel free to give me a ring on my mobile number if you need anything or for some urgent matters or write on e-mail ([email protected]). My cat may be freighted of new person in my house so side she can hide away from you couple days, but in general she is a friendly one. I should say that she likes catch mice and could bring this animals from street to my house, but it is in a cats nature. I have already prepared the necessary foods for my cat. You will find it inside the fridge. You are always welcome to use the fridge, foods, TV and other facilities I have at my home, but I ask you don’t have any parties at my house because one old lady lives next door and she might call the police in case of noise after 23:00. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Marina.

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It seems that Hannah has already provided a good correction, Marina. All I would change is "neigbour" (English spelling!) Den
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Dear Carolyn,

Hope you are doing great well. Thank you so much for agreeing to look after my house and my cat Isolda. I will be traveling around Russia all my holidays for my entire holiday. During this time I can be reached Feel free to give me a ring on my mobile phone, for any reason. if you need anything or for some  urgent matters or write on e-mail I can also be reached via email at ([email protected]) if you cannot get ahold of me on my mobile.

 

My cat may be maybe frightened of new person people in my house, so side she can might hide away from you for a couple of days. but In general, she is a friendly one cat. I should say also mention that she likes to catch mice and could possibly bring this animal a mouse in from street to my the house. but it is in a cats nature.(Unnecessary information)  I have already prepared the necessary foods for my cat Isolda. You will find it inside the fridge.

 

You are always welcome to use the fridge, foods, TV and other facilities I have at my home. but However, I ask that you don’t have any parties at my house because an older neighbor lady next door that is known to call the police due to noise after 23:00. one old lady lives next door and she might call the police in case of noise after 23:00.

 

Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Marina

 

 

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