Please check my letter:)
Dear Alex,
Thank you for the wondeful time which (or that) I've spent at your house.
Suddenly I realized that I forgot my purse inat the guest room. (or: Suddenly I realized that I left my purse in the guest room.)
Can you send me it inwith a parcel?
Thank you,
Tom(Don't forget to provide your address so they can send you your parcel :) )
0 votedApril 20, 20171Hello, my name is Mai. (Capitals letters for starts of sentences and proper nouns (names))
I have started to study English. (Missing words)I want to open the world. (I liked this sentence)
I want more reed book books to read and to see more look of the world. (Sentences felt weird. Missing words. Watch spelling).I think than that I write my English very wrong poorly.
Nice to meet you! (Capitals)
Very good attempt. I understood everything you said. Just some minor grammar issues :).
0 votedApril 20, 20171relationship
I don't take after my dad and my mam. Beacause my dad is quite caseless. My dad spend me a little time when I grew. But I get on with my dad. In my childhood I sent time on my brother.Some corrections:
- Mam -> Mum (UK), Mom (US).
- Beacause -> Because (spelling error / typo).
- Caseless -> This is not a word. I'm assuming a typo... did you mean careless? Meaning: not giving sufficient attention or thought to avoiding harm or errors.
- Spend Me: To spend is present tense. You seem to be after past tense... this means you're after the word "spent". E.g. I have spent money (in the past) vs. I spend money (currently happening).
- Sent: Typo? Sent is the past tense of send. As in I send an email. Did you mean spent which is the past tense of spend as above. If one is to spend time with something they are giving time to that something.
- on: This suggests you are doing something to your brother or are physically on them. Did you mean with? This would suggest they are around you / near you. I'm going to assume "with".
Here is my correction:
"I don't take after my parents, this is because my dad is careless. Even though my dad spent little time with me as a kid I get along with him. As a child I spent time with my brother."
OR (depending on what you mean by because)
"I don't take after my parents. Because my dad is careless he spent little time with me as a child. I don't dislike him though, instead as a child I spent time with my brother."
0 votedMarch 27, 20160- Regarding the website: It looks to be a poorly written sentence. "Unless we are mistaken, you have not yet settled the bill" is grammatically correct. As a bit of extra feedback unrelated to your question: Here are some better ways to word this sentence: "About "set" and "settle" : Is one of these words can be removed ?" "Regarding "set" and "settle": Can one of these words be removed?" is grammatically correct. or "Regarding "set" and "settle": Is it possible to remove one of these words?" is grammatically correct. or "Regarding "set" and "settle": Are one of these words able to be removed?" is grammatically correct.0 votedMarch 20, 20161
