relationship I don't take after my dad and my mam. Beacause my dad is quite caseless. My dad spend me a little time when I grew. But I get on with my dad. In my childhood I sent time on my brother.

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I don't take after my dad and my mam mom. Beacause my dad is quite caseless. My dad spend me a little time when I grew. But I get on with my dad. In my childhood I sent time on my brother.

I think in this way you could say:

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I dont talk much about my parents. Because my dad is very careless. My dad spend very little time with me when i was kid and while growing up. But i got over with it. During my childhood, i did spend a lot of time with my brother.

'Mam' is what people call their mothers in many places in the north of England (my father called his mother this) and it is also used in Wales but it is a regional variant and thus strange to hear from a non-native speaker. I'd advise you to use either 'mum' or 'mom', which are the most common things to call your mother in the UK and US respectively.

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I don't take after my dad and my mam. Beacause my dad is quite caseless. My dad spend me a little time when I grew. But I get on with my dad. In my childhood I sent time on my brother.

Some corrections:

- Mam -> Mum (UK), Mom (US).

- Beacause -> Because (spelling error / typo).

- Caseless -> This is not a word. I'm assuming a typo... did you mean careless? Meaning: not giving sufficient attention or thought to avoiding harm or errors.

- Spend Me: To spend is present tense. You seem to be after past tense... this means you're after the word "spent". E.g. I have spent money (in the past) vs. I spend money (currently happening).

- Sent: Typo? Sent is the past tense of send. As in I send an email. Did you mean spent which is the past tense of spend as above. If one is to spend time with something they are giving time to that something.

- on: This suggests you are doing something to your brother or are physically on them. Did you mean with? This would suggest they are around you / near you. I'm going to assume "with".

Here is my correction:

"I don't take after my parents, this is because my dad is careless. Even though my dad spent little time with me as a kid I get along with him. As a child I spent time with my brother."

OR (depending on what you mean by because)

"I don't take after my parents. Because my dad is careless he spent little time with me as a child. I don't dislike him though, instead as a child I spent time with my brother."

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