Jaz
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Dec 24, 2019
Alexはすごく前向きで明るい方です。日本語もとても上手でした！特に発音が上手く、さすがネイティブと毎日話しているだけあるなぁと感激しました！日本語の勉強頑張ってね！Alexなら大丈夫^ ^
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A funny day
I forgot my telephone password. It's really very unbelievable . Luckily, I reseted the password by through the company's website.
I think that I lost my memory ("lost my memory" sounds like you lost your memory permanently. Better to use "I forgot") due to lack of the sleep and heavy stress. So, maybe I maybe need to listen to some happy musics or go for a walking.
Today is a sunshine day and a Friday. Even though tomorrow is the weekend, but as a accountant, the beginning of every month,my colleagues and I are always very busy (or rushing) to close the ledger timely on time. As an accountant, this happens at the beginning of every month. I wish they could come back to home early today. (I hope we can go home early today)
Recently, I like watching TV Shows. The TV name is 'The Big Bang Theory '. It's very interesting .
Ok, that's all. Thank you for reading my terrible AWESOME (hehe) diary. Have a good weekend！Nice work! You did a great job using the correct verb tenses throughout this diary entry. The only problem I see is that you keep trying to add things on and on in a sentence (it's called a run-on sentence). That can get a little confusing to read, so it is better to keep things short and separate information into different sentences.
I'm excited to read more about you, Coco! :D0 votedDecember 2, 20161Awesome work, Sally! You did so well on grammar, I had to look super hard for anything else wrong. I write this at the beginning instead of the corrections because I want you to know a few things:
1. green mean questions I have for you. They are not necessarily wrong, I just wanted to double check your understanding2. blue are the suggestions I have, as in synonyms that would make the paragraph a little prettier. But the word you had before is totally okay!
3. yellow means errors that need to be changed.
4. orange means suggestions to make the word or paragraph better.
Whew! Now that that's done, I hope this helps! You did an excellent job, and I am very impressed that you are able to write about information based on just three graphs. It's not easy! I wouldn't have done as well as you did in my second language (Spanish). Don't be discouraged. Always keep improving. You totally got this, Sally!
Total school spending
These pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a (is this data taken from one school? If not, it should be "schools". If so, then it's fine. Carry on) school between 1981 and 2001 in the UK.
The proportion of total school budget on teachers’ salaries increased from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991, but (this is good. Another word you can use is ", however,".) it fell by 5% in 2001 in the UK. Then, there was a slight increase in terms of insurance with ("from" might be better) 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001 in the UK. When it comes to other workers’ salaries, the proportion of school spending on it experienced a downward trend from 28% to 15% over three years.
On the other hand, in 1981, 15% of total school budget went to resources. Then, the figure saw an increase to (did it go up from 15% to 20%, or did it increase 20%, making it from 15% to 35%) 20% in 1991, but encountered a drop to (again, did it drop 9%, making it 26%. Or did it go down to 9%?) 9% in 2001. While the proportion of total school spending on furniture and equipment from 15% in 1981 to 5% in 1991, but it climbed to 23% in 2001. "While the total proportion of school spending on furniture and equipment was 15% in 1981 and 5% in 1991, it climbed as high as 23% in 2001"(usually when we use a while statement, the second clause is some information that is very different than the information of first clause. That's why I put "as high as" to show how different the information was from the first part, if that makes sense.)
Overall, it is clear that the payment of teachers’ salaries accounted for the largest percentage of all categories in total school spending in 1981,1991 and 2001 in British the UK.0 votedDecember 2, 20160My family
Hi guys. My name's Huy. I'm from Viet Nam. I'm twenty eight years old. I'm a nurse and work in E (Is this the name of the hospital?) hospital. Then (Now or Next), let my introduce my family. My family is made up of my father, my mother, my younger sister and me I (before, it was a sentence fragment, meaning it wasn't a complete sentence. I made it into a complete sentence). My father looks younger than his age (not sure if I understood that correctly). My mother is a housewife. My younger sister is twenty three years old. I'm married. I'm living with my family at Bac Tu Liem district, Ha Noi. I have a wife and a baby girl that is five months old. My daughter is so cute. My wife is a nurse, she works in the same hopital as I do a hospital the same with me. She is beautiful, smart and her cooking is very tasty. I love my family.
Thank a lot. Nice to meet you:))Nice work! It is very cool to hear about your family! It sounds like you have a happy life where you're at.
0 votedDecember 2, 20160- Un Resumen del articulo de Bana Alabed Antes del ascenso del presidente Bashar al Asad en 2001, Alepo, Siria fue un cuidad internacional, industrial y centro comercial. Era una buena ciudad. Ahora, los ciudadanos de Alepo están luchando por sus vidas. Aun una niña con una cuenta de tuiter, por medio de contar su vida cotidiana en Alepo estos días. La niña, que tiene solo siete años de edad, se llama Bana Alabed. Su madre, Fatemah, tuitea lo que la niña quiere revelar la destrucción y la lucha donde se vive. De hecho, habia un bombardeo el lunes. Su casa fue destruido, pero Bana, Fatemah y estan vivos. Para Fatemah, quien estuidio periodismo y ciencias políticas, las publicaciones puede mostrar el mundo su vida diaria. Dice que los tuits son genuinos de Bana. Habia un escasez de alimientos, falta de cuidados médicos y bombardeos continuos en su ciudad. Tras los eventos en la última semana y sus tuits, recibieron amenazas de muerte. Fatemah dijo que “Bana quiere que el mundo escuche nuestras voces”. http://www.bbc.com/mundo/noticias-internacional-38158010December 1, 201630
- This is and These are So, I teach through a set curriculum, and I've come across something I don't know. This is/These are my brother and sister. In one area, the correct form says "These are my brother and sister" In another area, the correct form says "This is my mom and dad". Which one is right? And why?December 1, 201660
Why people like play games
I am wondering why computer games are so popular among young people (or "generation". Sounds more formal). Now, it's hard to find a child that does not like to play any computer games. But what makes computer games so popular?
The very first reason as I believe is the possibility to go outside of the reality, sometimes it's a chance to run away from reality. I remember times of from the 90's, when the a computer game could be compared with the price of gold. There was difficult even It was even difficult to find some play consoles like Sega Mega Drive or Nintendo.
There is a new interesting trend regarding computer games - now it is popular not always not only is it popular to play, but also to observe while others playing and commenting the actions on the screen. Some Around 10 years ago, there it was hard to believe that such an industry will be so popular. Nevertheless, the most watchable bloggers on Youtube has millions of views. There must been some reason what that makes such activities so widespread and popular among kids and teens. Maybe because every generation becomes is becoming more and more lazy.My comments:
Now hey! I'm not lazy, haha. I think it's not only popular among the young generation, but even amongst 20 and 30 year olds. Like you said, when the Nintendo and Sega Mega Drive came out, it was difficult to find. But that created the gamers we see today. To be honest, I have watched some gamers on a site called Twitch, but not too often. I mainly watch them to improve myself on a certain game.
If you're interested, there is a TED talk that talks about the benefits of video games. It's called: Daphne Bavelier, Your brain on video games. There are subtitles if you need it. Also, here's a link:
https://www.ted.com/talks/daphne_bavelier_your_brain_on_video_gamesI'm not sure if this is a subject you're really interested in, but I find it interesting. Best of luck!
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