Funny day I forgot my telephone password. It's really very unbelievable . Luckily, I reseted the password by website. I think that I lost my memory due to lack of the sleep and heavy stress. So I m

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Coco

Funny day I forgot my telephone password. It's really very unbelievable . Luckily, I reseted the password by website. I think that I lost my memory due to lack of the sleep and heavy stress. So I maybe need to listen some happy musics or go for a walking . Today is a sunshine day and Friday, Even if tomorrow is weekend, but as a accountant, each the beginning of the month,my colleagues are always very busy for closing the ledger timely.I wish they could come back to home early today. Recently, I like watching TV Show , The TV name is 'The Big Bang '. It's very interesting . Ok, that's all. Thank you for reading my terrible diary. Have a good weekend！

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A funny day

I forgot my telephone password. It's really very unbelievable . Luckily, I reseted the password by through the company's website.
I think that I lost my memory ("lost my memory" sounds like you lost your memory permanently. Better to use "I forgot") due to lack of the sleep and heavy stress. So, maybe I maybe need to listen to some happy musics or go for a walking.

Today is a sunshine day and a Friday. Even though tomorrow is the weekend, but as a accountant, the beginning of every month,my colleagues and I are always very busy (or rushing) to close the ledger timely on time. As an accountant, this happens at the beginning of every month. I wish they could come back to home early today. (I hope we can go home early today)
Recently, I like watching TV Shows. The TV name is 'The Big Bang Theory '. It's very interesting .
Ok, that's all. Thank you for reading my terrible AWESOME (hehe) diary. Have a good weekend！

Nice work! You did a great job using the correct verb tenses throughout this diary entry. The only problem I see is that you keep trying to add things on and on in a sentence (it's called a run-on sentence). That can get a little confusing to read, so it is better to keep things short and separate information into different sentences.

I'm excited to read more about you, Coco! :D

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