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- Woolly Mammoth Hi! Could you please help me to make this text sound more natural? Thank you!!! ------ The woolly mammoth (Mammuthus primigenius) is an extinct mammal from the Ice Age, closely related to modern elephants. They looked like their relatives but covered with a thick layer of fur to maintain body heat. On average, the shoulder length of an individual was between 2.74 m and 3.35 m and weighed 6 tons, females, however, were up to 1m shorter, were lighter and had smaller tusks compared to males. It is believed that the animals used their tusks to explore places covered with ice and snow while looking for grass to feed. The populations of the species were widely distributed in Tundra biomes and grasslands from Eurasia and North America. Like humans, mammoths had a social structure, in which females and their cubs lived in groups, while males remained solitary. These peculiar creatures disappeared approximately 10000 years ago, with a notable exception: The 300 mammoths of the Wrangler Island in Siberia that remained as a population until 4000 years ago. It is well known that humans and mammoths had a very close interaction during the Ice Age.March 8, 201820
- Deutsch lernen Hallo! Mein Name ist Paula und ich bin 24 Jahre alt. Ich komme aus Kolumbien, ein großes Land in Südamerika. Ich Sprache keine Deutsch aber ich möchte lernen es zu sprechen. Ich bin eine kleine Person. Ich messe 1.60 m und meine Schuhgröße ist 37. Der Farbe meine Haare ist braun, meine Augen sind auch braun, ich bin eine einfache Person. Meine Lippen sind dünn, klein und rosa. Ich mag den Winter, ich liebe Vögel, und ist wunderschön wenn ein Vogel sitzt in einem Zweig und Schnee im Hintergrund. Am Morgen esse ich Croissant mit Kaffeegetränke. Zur Mittagessen, esse ich Pizza oder Panini. Ich essen nichts anderes.February 27, 201810
- Looking for a place Hi! My name is Paula, I am 24 years old and I just arrived to Munich. I came here to study a 2 year Masters in Paleontology at LMU. Therefore, I am looking for a nice place to live in during my stay in Germany. The location depends on the traffic connections, distance to the Paleontological Museum of Munich (Richard-Wagner-Str. 10) and the stores nearby. As for myself, I am very organized person, and I love to cook. I am also very peaceful, so I won´t cause any trouble. Do you have a place for me or any further questions? You can send me a message using this platform, or via Whatsapp. Have a wondeful day! ---------------- Thank you for your help!October 28, 201721
El Hámster Perezoso
En una granja en Siria viven una familia de hámsteres y sus amigos. Gordito el hámster es muy
gordo y un teleadicto. Sus padres siempre le dicen que él necesita hacer ejercicio.
Gordito no se preocupa por aumentar de peso y sigue comiendo. Sus amigos y su familia
saben que este no es bien para su bienestar esto no es bueno para él o esto no le genera bienestar.
La familia de Gordito es muy trabajadora y cosecha muchos (frutos, verduras, or whatever) para el granjero, pero el
granjero no es simpático (bueno o justo) y no les da suficientes (frutos, verduras, or whatever) para sobrevivir.
A altas horas de la noche, los padres de Gordito dejan a obtener más cosechas salen a obtener más de la cosecha para alimentar a la
familia, aunque ya han recibido su parte. El granjero ve que parte de su cosecha ha sido robada y
pone las trampas para encontrar al culpable. Cuando los padres de Gordito recogían (productos como frutas, verduras, etc.), el granjero salió y les capturó.
En la casa, Gordito comía toda la comida con su mejor amiga, Anita la cerda.-Han tardado mucho en traer la comida- Gordito dice, empezando a preocuparse.
- ¿Tus padres? ellos volverán pronto- Anita dice.
Hola. En español no es usual utilizar la palabra "cosechas" para hacer referencia a los productos de la cosecha. Es un sustantivo colectivo indeterminado que en singular se refiere a un grupo de cosas que se recogen o se obtienen. Por ejemplo frutos, verduras o alegrías. Si quieres usarlo, debes especificar de qué es la cosecha.
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What a lovely story !
0 votedMarch 29, 20170El Hámster Perezoso (Parte 2)
Gordito dice (?) . <venga conmigo="" para="" encontrar="" mis="" padres.=""> </venga>
<venga conmigo="" para="" encontrar="" mis="" padres.="">Anita y Gordito van a la granja para encontrar a los padres de Gordito. </venga>
<ellos dijeron="" ellos="" estarían="" en="" casa="" por="" las="" ocho,="" pero="" ahora="" son="" nueve.=""><venga conmigo="" para="" encontrar="" mis="" padres.=""> En la granja, Gordito ve sus padres en las garras del granjero. </venga></ellos><ellos dijeron="" ellos="" estarían="" en="" casa="" por="" las="" ocho,="" pero="" ahora="" son="" nueve.=""><venga conmigo="" para="" encontrar="" mis="" padres.="">-¡Nooooo! - Gordito grita, y corre detrás del granjero. Pero Gordito es demasiado lento y gordo para alcanzar al granjero. (HAHAHAHAHA This is adorable!)
-¡Ay, Anita! mis padres se han ido para siempre- Gordito grita. </venga></ellos><ellos dijeron="" ellos="" estarían="" en="" casa="" por="" las="" ocho,="" pero="" ahora="" son="" nueve.=""><venga conmigo="" para="" encontrar="" mis="" padres.="">-Ellos no se han ido para siempre, sólo tenemos que ser fuertes y les salvaremos- Anita dice.</venga></ellos>
<ellos dijeron="" ellos="" estarían="" en="" casa="" por="" las="" ocho,="" pero="" ahora="" son="" nueve.=""><venga conmigo="" para="" encontrar="" mis="" padres.="">- Yo no puede hacer eso, es demasiado trabajo y soy muy gordo- Gordito se queja.</venga></ellos>
0 votedMarch 29, 20171- Addicted to Facebook. Now, I am trying to stay away from social media. I finished my career a month and a half ago and since then, I´ve not been able to find an entire day of peace. I have nothing to do, which is a serious problem considering I live in a small town that is half an hour from Bogotá, the capital city of my country. That´s why I became addicted to Facebook. Being addicted to Facebook is a serious thing. I usually spend about 7 hours in my Facebook page. I like to find out thing about people I know, I love to chat with my friends (or anyone) and I like to watch funny videos. But when you realize you can´t sleep well and you are developing weird relationships with some of you facebook friends in which you depend on the contact with them and you are giving them a lot of information about your private life; when you try to talk with someone face to face or virtually and you have nothing to say because your brain isn´t working anymore, you start asking yourself if is healthy to you to spend time in that way. This writing exercise is helping me to distract my mind from other things. Besides learning English I am doing a lot of fun activities (yes, fun activities) this month. For example, I´m reading a book called “La Vorágine”, which is very interesting because describes Colombian landscapes. I´m also learning about Colombian history and history of photography. That´s ok, I guess, beacuse I´m 22 and time is passing by very fast, I should spend my time in memorable things… Thanks for you help :).July 18, 201610
- HEEEELP PLEASE Hi everybody, I am starting a crowfunding campaing to buy a bike for my dog, pleaaase help me to correct the mistakes on the text. Hello My name is Paula and my life partner is Tesla. She is a dog that resulted from the cross between a Labrador and Border Collie . Months ago , we decided to move to a new house in the city. Although Tesla has more space, we did not have a very important factor : the absence of parks in our neighborhood. Before, she ran and remained in constant physical activity . Now , in the absence of adequate space , she can´t run and play, because the streets are dangerous. Tesla , weighing 20 kilos , currently weighs about 28 kilos . WE NEED YOUR HELP! With 200 USD we can buy a bicycle and adapter to give long and invigorating walks to Tesla and so , she will have a healthy life.May 2, 201630
