What I did yesterday in simple and continuous past
Good afternoon
Yesterday, I woke up very early
, to
take the time to prepare lunch, because Sunday is when my dad comes
, .
For lunch I prepared some quesadillas with chicken
;. when During the afternoon arrived
, my father arrived and we shared the lunch that I made
, after that, hHe had brought some baking cakes,
which we made
after lunch. them and tThen, my father
left went home
;. I left
in the middle of the four [at 4:30??] to
late [seems like the wrong word here] with some friends and my pet
, wWe played many songs
, and laughed.
ing after laughter came When the night
came, the moon appeared,
and I went straight to my house, to dinner, and
I prepared to go to
sleep. dreamtThank you for your help
Hello, this is a really good start. I was able to follow the first part of this and made fairly minor suggestions. But I got confused in the last section. I made revisions based on what I think you were trying to say. But I may have changed the underlying meaning. You seem to use too many commas, and perhaps are a little confused about when to use commas vs. periods vs. semi-colons. For now I suggest you focus on periods and commas and ignore semi-colons, which are difficult to use correctly -- even for native English speakers!. I hope this helps a little. Keep writing!