What I did yesterday in simple and continuous past
Good afternoon
Yesterday, I woke up very early, to take the time to prepare lunch, because Sunday is when my dad comes, lunch I prepared some quesadillas with chicken; when the afternoon arrived, my father arrived and we shared the lunch that I made, after that, he brought some baking cakes, we made them and then, my father left home; I left in the middle of the four to late with some friends and my pet, we played many songs, and laughing after laughter came the night, the moon appeared, I went straight to my house, to dinner, and I prepared to go to dreamt
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What I did yesterday in simple and continuous past
Good afternoonYesterday, I woke up very early, to take the time to prepare lunch, because Sunday is when my dad comes, . For lunch I prepared some quesadillas with chicken;. when During the afternoon arrived, my father arrived and we shared the lunch that I made, after that, hHe had brought some baking cakes, which we made after lunch. them and tThen, my father left went home;. I left in the middle of the four [at 4:30??] to late [seems like the wrong word here] with some friends and my pet, wWe played many songs, and laughed. ing after laughter came When the night came, the moon appeared, and I went straight to my house, to dinner, and I prepared to go to sleep. dreamt
Thank you for your help
Hello, this is a really good start. I was able to follow the first part of this and made fairly minor suggestions. But I got confused in the last section. I made revisions based on what I think you were trying to say. But I may have changed the underlying meaning. You seem to use too many commas, and perhaps are a little confused about when to use commas vs. periods vs. semi-colons. For now I suggest you focus on periods and commas and ignore semi-colons, which are difficult to use correctly -- even for native English speakers!. I hope this helps a little. Keep writing!
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