Venezuela, today i wa

Hi! my name is Juan, i am 22 years old and today i would like write about my country...Venezuela.

Every morning when i m going to the university, like around 6 am, i pass in front of the market and i see a lot of people waiting for buy some food since last day yesterday?, there are two kinds of people, the kind who really need the food (like a 80%) and the other kind, the resellers (we called them "Bachaqueros").  These people buy food with the intention of reselling it at a really expensive cost, For example: If an apple costs 3.00 $ they are going to resell it for 30.00 $ and everybody has a day to buy, it depends on our last number ID, i only can buy the fridays because my last number ID ends in 9.

On my way to the university ( I'm a business administration student in to a public university) i am afraid of the thieves in the street, there are too many thieves outside ,  My friends and I have been victims to the insecurity many times, and is impossible not to feel afraid.

After class I  go to work in a drugstore between  2 and 10 pm, in the drugstore i see sick people the who can´t find their medications to get well and it is maddening, i would like help more people but i can't.

Venezuela is a lovely place and we are not going to get surrender, every one of us has his way of growing up and today i want to learn new lenguages (English, Chinesse) to be able to be a better man and help, help all of the people the who i am able.

!good nigth, morning or afternoon! wherever you are, i´m grateful be your time with this letter.

Thank you so much for sharing about your country!  I am sorry that food and medicine is difficult to buy, and that you have to deal with thrives as you walk to school! Good job writing in English! 

- in your first sentence, the word "like" is used in casual conversation more than in writing  

- not sure if you meant that people have been standing in line since yesterday...so that might be the wrong correction

- make sure you put an apostrophe when you say I'm or can't

- not sure if you want explanations for all of my corrections...if you would like me to explain, let me know!