The problem with garbage
Have you felt worried about the problem of garbage in your city?, Have you ever thrown waste in the street?, you think if all of us were aware the damage that we produce to the environment, we would change ours daily life actions?
Garbage produced in our homes, businesses and some industrial sources, so if we change our habits we will help with the garbage problem, of course we can, all changes start with ourselves for example, I use only a bottle of water all the week when I am working, when the bottle is empty I wash it and reuse, other thing that you can do is utilize recyclable sheet instead of normal sheet.
As you can see, exists many forms to contribute with the environment.
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The problem with garbage
Have you felt worried about the problem of garbage in your city?, Have you ever thrown trash in the street?, you think if all of us were aware of the damage that we produce to the environment, we would change our daily life actions?Garbage is produced in our homes, businesses and some industrial sources. so if we change our habits we will help with the garbage problem. of course we can, all changes start with ourselves. for example, I use only one bottle of water all the week when I am working, when the bottle is empty I wash and reuse it, other thing that you can do is utilize recyclable sheet instead of normal sheet.
As you can see, exists many forms there are many ways to contribute with the environment.
nice job! I changed some of the punctuation...a few run-on sentences.
-I"m not an English teacher, so I'm sure there is an official reason why "felt worried" doesn't really work...you would say "felt sad" or felt happy...but for some reason, "felt worried" doesn't sound right. Maybe someone else can explain to you
-I would say "trash" instead of waste...though waste would work technically.
- Our instead of ours...because it's referring to "life actions".
- I would say one bottle instead of "a" bottle.
- Also, wash and reuse it, instead of wash it and reuse.
- I'm not sure what a recyclable sheet is...to me a sheet means the covering for a bed...maybe referring to plastic wrap or foil?
-I think you are trying to say "there are many ways" on the last line
anyhow...great job!!
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