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- Haha. Even as a Native speaker, that's a weird sentence. Political Climate is the atmosphere/mood or opnions of a political situation. The sentence is saying because of the opinions about the politics that this is happening. I don't know what 'this' is, since I don't know the context of the sentence, but pretty much what this means. Please, tell me if there's anything I said that you don't understand.0 votedMay 24, 20161
Interesting monument
I am taking part with my son in a competition, called "Fifty symbols of Surgut".
We must write an artiсle about a monument and take a <font style="background-color: yellow;">photo</font> with <font style="background-color: yellow;">it</font>.
We <font style="background-color: yellow;">chose</font><strike>d</strike> a monument of <font style="background-color: yellow;"><font style="background-color: yellow;">a<font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">nurse</font></font> near the traumatology. <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Yesterday</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> we went to the monument and <strike>make </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">took</font> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">photos</font> with <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">it</font>.
It is a really nice sculpture of a young beautiful women! <strike>The</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">A</font> talented artist made the elegant and unrepeatable monument. It seems the nurse will open the door and <strike>will</strike> disappear <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">to</font> flee to <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">her</font> patients. The <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">sculpture</font> is quite small, about 3 meters in height, but it has a charm <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">to it</font>.
The monument was dedicated to <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">all</font> medical profession<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">als</font>. <strike>The</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">P</font>eople must remember <strike>about</strike> their hard work.
<strike>It was created for money of city companys.</strike>
We liked this <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">sculpture </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">and</font></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">we </font></font>wrote a <strike>small nice </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">nice, small</font> article about it.*The past form of "Choose" is "Chose". Different verbs have different past forms. This is just something you have to memorize.
**It was created for money of city companys. I have no idea what this is saying at all. Maybe, "City companies raised money for the statue"? To raise money means to gather money for a cause.
***Small nice article about it. This sentence does make sense, but it's just sounds more natural to say nice, small. If you speak with natives, they can help you with using a more natural speech.
****The talented artist made the elegant and unrepeatable monument. Since, you did not identify exactly who the talented artist is, you should use the word "a" instead.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask. ^-^
0 votedMarch 3, 20162- I'm an advanced student and I often fail when I have to speak for a long time. I believe that happens because my vocabulary is very small, even though I know many words, but I do not know how create the right combination between them. How can I improve my speaking skill? I changed it a tad to make it sound a bit more natural. The most you can do is practice speaking English with natives. And just keep practicing. There's not much else you can do besides that. I'm sure you'll get the hang of it eventually. ^-^0 votedFebruary 25, 20160
- I am in a fantastic theme park! The atmosphere is amazing here. Many people are starving because of the glorious smell. I can see a lot of extraordinary rides. Visitors are enjoying them. Children are exhausted, but they are still hilarious to watch. Everyone is making tremendous noise. (Somebody is even terrified?). This park is surrounded by enormous pines. Also, I can see many (scrumptious?) flowers. Everyone is laughing. No wonder! Here are a lot of ridiculous clowns. Scrumptious - (of food) extremely appetizing or delicious; (of a person) very attractive I'm unsure what this is suppose to mean here. I'm assuming you meant beautiful or pretty. Other adjectives you can use are alluring, beauteous, bewitching, or pulchritudinous. Somebody is even terrified - I'm unsure what this means here. Terrified of the rides? Terrified of the noise? You should either completely take out this sentence or add why they're terrified. Examples: The rides were so large, somebody was terrified. In the passage, I added a few words that would help the passage make more sense, just for context reasons. Besides stating the context, this was really good. I hope you do well on your assignment.0 votedFebruary 24, 20161
Just writing about my dog.
I love my dog for two reasons. The first one is, because my daddy gave it away to me. On November 11th of 2004, my father and I were walking on the street when we suddenly saw a white fur ball in a box and, at that instant, we both fell in love with him. The second reason is, because he is a loyal companion. When I'm sad, he's there; when I'm happy, he's there and he knows that when I'm angry, he shouldn't be there. In conclusion, my love makes my life more enjoyable, because of the decision my father made that day.
I know I made a lot of errors so please help xD"On November 11th of 2004, my father and I were walking on the street..."
On is correct technically, though a more common way of saying it is:
"On November 11th of 2004, my father and I were walking down the street..."
You can use whichever, though.
Really good overall. Your English is good, and the only things to change here are the commas and semicolons. Congrats! ^-^
0 votedFebruary 22, 20161
