Interesting monument
I am taking part with my son in a competition, called "Fifty symbols of Surgut".
We must write an artiсle about a monument and take a foto with.
We choosed a monument of nurse near the traumatology. Yesteday we went to the monument and make fotos with.
It is a really nice sculpture of a young beautiful women! The talented artist made the elegant and unrepeatable monument. It seems, the nurse will open the door and will disappear, flee to patients. The skulptur is quite small, about 3 meters in height, but it has a charm.
The monument was dedicated to medical profession. The people must remember about their hard work.
It was created for money of city companys.
We liked this skulptur and wrote a small nice article about it.
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An interesting monument
I am taking part with my son in a competition called "Fifty Symbols of Surgut" with my son.We have to write an artiсle about a monument and take a photo of it.
We chose a monument of a nurse near the traumatology. Yesterday, we went to the monument and took photos of it.
It is a really nice sculpture of a young and beautiful women! A talented artist created the elegant and unrepeatable unique monument. It looks like the nurse is about to open a door and will disappear, fleeing to her patients. The sculpture is quite small at about 3 meters in height, but it has a charm.
The monument was dedicated to the medical profession. The People must remember about their hard work.
It was created using the money of city companies.
We liked this sculpture and wrote a small nice article about it.
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Interesting monument
I am taking part with my son in a competition, called "Fifty symbols of Surgut".We must write an artiсle about a monument and take a photo with it.
We chose
It is a really nice sculpture of a young beautiful women!
The monument was dedicated to all medical professionals.
We liked this sculpture and we wrote a
*The past form of "Choose" is "Chose". Different verbs have different past forms. This is just something you have to memorize.
**It was created for money of city companys. I have no idea what this is saying at all. Maybe, "City companies raised money for the statue"? To raise money means to gather money for a cause.
***Small nice article about it. This sentence does make sense, but it's just sounds more natural to say nice, small. If you speak with natives, they can help you with using a more natural speech.
****The talented artist made the elegant and unrepeatable monument. Since, you did not identify exactly who the talented artist is, you should use the word "a" instead.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask. ^-^
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