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Mi experiencia deportiva
Me gusta mucho hacer deporte. Desde pequeña (yo) he practicado deporte: cuando tenìa tenía 7 años ya jugaba al baloncesto con mi hermano. Todos mi compañeros eran hombres y despues de 2 años yo decidì decidí ir con mis amigas a jugar al vòleibol vóleibol. Al principio tenìamos teníamos dos entrenamientos para por semana y la el partida partido del domingo, pero luego nosostros crecimos y lo entrenamientos volvieron en se convirtieron en tres a la semana con la adiciónde 3 horas de gimnasio. Yo he jugado al vòleibol vóleibol por durante 10 años y he cambiado muchos équipos mucho de equipo. Ahora ya no juego, màs pero voy al gimnasio. Me falta mucho Echo de menos la competiciòn competición y el juego de équipo.
Yo pienso que no es importante qué el deporte que practicas, sòlo haz movimiento pero sí el movimiento porque aiuda ayuda a estar bien no solo el de cuerpo pero sino también la de mente.Esta bien, a pesar de que las correcciones se entiende muy bien. Atenta a los signos de puntuación y a los artículos en general.
0 votedMay 3, 20161- Can you correct me this formal letter? Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am strongly disappointed with the club owing to fact that the chairman told me that Mr Price, Who is the famous writer, would come to our next club meeting. I have followed him since I was at the school and I wont to know him. Nevertheless, I think that providing the club invited him to our Christmas meeting, he would come this time. However, I would like to point out that it is not possible, I will reserve one or two copies of his book even though, my own view on the matter is that the book is very expensive. Could you give some information about when the books would be available? I look foward to hearing you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Carlos GarcíaMay 3, 201610
- The Death of Karen Silkwood. As I told you yesterday, today I am going to talk you about "The Death of Karen Silkwood". I read this book a few days ago and I liked it. This story start when Karen Silkwood begin to work in a nuclear factory. Before, she had worked as a secretary but she didn't like the secretary's life so she quited her work. The first day in the factory, she knew Susan who said her that if she was polluted with radioactive dust, she would have gone to the shower room. Her job was easy but she had to be carefully because she used to work with fuel rods, not chocolate. After a while, she found out that the nuclear factory isn't safety because the chairman, who was named Bailey, was more worried about the way for doing money than the safety.April 29, 201610
Yes, I believe in the fast reactors like SFR (sodium fast cooled reactor), but in the modern reactors (as the reactors that was proposed by the GIF) I think the problem isn't the safety, however, radiactive waste could be a big problem in the future. Now, there are prototypes such as ASTRID that can reduce very much the radiactive waste but it isn't more than a prototype...
0 votedApril 29, 20160I think that the problem is always the same. Is nuclear energy safe? Chernobyl, Fukushima... As Einstein said about the world war III in reference to nuclear arms "The world war III will be fought with nuclear arms but the world war IV will be fought with sticks and stones".
It is a powerful energy and it must use carefully.
0 votedApril 29, 20160lenguaje
Te das cuenta de que cuando lees en el un idioma diferente de alguien que muchas veces puedes ver la construcción of de su idioma. Por ejemplo, hace un poco momentos, corregí un diario de iTalki y escribió que decía “We were thinking in a plane” cuando significó quería decir "We were thinking about a plane”. En esto caso, creo que tradujo de español a inglés directamente.En general está bien, has escrito un texto difícil. Los errores que has cometido no son especialmente graves, leyendo y practicando los corregirás. Ánimo.
0 votedApril 28, 20160
