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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am strongly disappointed with the club owing to fact that the chairman told me that Mr Price, Who is the famous writer, would come to our next club meeting. I have followed him since I was at the school and I wont to know him.
Nevertheless, I think that providing the club invited him to our Christmas meeting, he would come this time. However, I would like to point out that it is not possible, I will reserve one or two copies of his book even though, my own view on the matter is that the book is very expensive.
Could you give some information about when the books would be available?
I look foward to hearing you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Carlos García
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Can you correct me this formal letter?
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to let you know that I am strongly (or, very) disappointed with the club owing due to fact that the chairman told me that Mr Price, who is the famous writer, would come to our next club meeting. I have followed him since I was at the school and I want to meet know him.
Nevertheless, I think that, providing the club invited him to our Christmas meeting, he would come this time. However, I would like to point out that it is not possible. I will reserve one or two copies of his book even though, my own view on the matter is that the book is very expensive.
Could you give me some information about when the books would be available?
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Carlos García
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