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That is a good general rule, though occasionally it can be altered slightly to improve the flow, for example, your first sentence could have been 'Yesterday, I saw a video about word order in the English Language' in which case 'When' has been used first.
I have tried to write some sentences in different tenses following the rule.
Saying that your other sentences work very well I have made a slight adjustment to a couple of them below which just improves the flow a little :)
I am going to go to school tomorrow by bus because it is obligatory.
I usually go swimming at the leisure center in the afternoon by bicycle because is good for my health.
I have been watching English movies at home every night to improve my listening skills.
I ate pizza before I got home last night because I was starving.
I accidentally got married in Mexico two years ago, I did not know the bride.I hope this helps, if you'd like any further explanation let me know :)
0 votedMay 2, 20181Are these same motion ?
tuck up my sleeves
roll up my sleeves
Usually you would say 'Roll up my sleeves' which is the act of folding them over multiple times. Tucking is a little different. You could 'Tuck in your sleeves' which involves concealing their edge under another piece of clothing, much like you would tuck in a shirt.0 votedMay 2, 20180- Suppose and Assume mean basically the same thing - taking something as fact without any proof of such - however I always consider assume to be a bit more formal, a phrase you would use in a working environment, whereas suppose is something I would use in an informal setting. I hope this helps :)0 votedMay 2, 20181
1/100 Ritualization disgusts me!
I have some OCDs (obssesive-compulsive disorder) which disgust me deeply. One of them is ritualization. When I do something, I hope to do it at a particular time, like 8:00 or 8:30. If it's 8:17, I'll probably tend to wait until 8:30.
This OCD disgusts me. I'm trying to kill it.
(I've only changed two words, the flow is perfect on this. However, I hope you'll be able to feel less negatively about your OCD in the future. It's hard, but its not something to be disgusted by, you're beautiful just the way you are)0 votedMay 1, 20181Kids Who Lost Their Parents in The Great East Japan Earthquake
The other day, I had a chance to do Laughter Yoga with volunteers and kids who lost their parents in The Great East Japan Earthquake.
It was the first time that any of the people had tried Laughter Yoga, so after an hour of doing it with them, I asked them what they thought. One of the kids, who looked like a junior high or high school student answered, "Laughing is the origin of life!"
It is surprising that after only one hour of Laughter Yoga, I could get an answer like this from a child, it really captured the spirit of Laughter Yoga.
If I can help even just one person to live on using Laughter Yoga, I thought, then I will keep going.
I've moved some sentences around a little, I hope I've captured what you wanted to say :) Laughter Yoga sounds beautiful0 votedMay 1, 20181Please give me advice
Tomorrow, I'm going to introduce myself at English class. Please read below.Hello, I’m Mio. Nice to meet you. My birthday is May 26th, and I’m waiting for your presents! I come to school on foot every day. Which I am sure you know can be very tiring because of Kobe University's high altitude. I’m from Okayama, so now I live alone and I have to do everything by myself. At first, cooking seems to be a big bother, but it is more enjoyable than I expected. I want to brush up my cooking skills during college life. Eating is my favorite thing! I like both Japanese and Western style meal, but I especially love sweets like cakes, cookies and chocolate. Please invite me to go to your favorite café. I haven’t decided which clubs I will join but I’m interested in orchestra and mandolin because I like listening to and playing music so much. I’m very forgetful, so please remember to tell me when I forget something important! Thank you for listening.
Your introduction was very eloquent :) I just altered a few bits to make it flow a little more naturally without changing too many of your words.0 votedMay 1, 20182
